"A hopeless attempt to escape from inevitability"
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- arcticspirit
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Someone's reaction...
I am sad when I watch this photo.
All is unavoidable.
A drop has fallen. It will not rise back.
That bounce up, "action and reaction", when caught as a slice in in the dimension of time, is a hopeless attempt to escape from inevitability.
The tiny column of water will fall down and then push up a similar hope.
Temporary. Sad... Colours are sharp and crude. Nothing subtle. Almost like black and white, only multidimensional.
This is why it is so BEAUTIFUL. So CRUEL !!!
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arcticspirit
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(smiles) I saw this... and it made me laugh.... btw, I did not edit their spelling... or anything.
"...from Critique Club...FIRST IMPRESSION:
Horrible shot...what were you thinking????COMPOSITION:
Totally off. It would have worked much better if it were upside down...and reversed horizontally.TECHNICAL:
Focus is toooo sharp. Lightin is poor, cause the dark parts are dark...and the light parts are light. DOF is hard to tell, so I won't comment on that.ARTISTIC:
Completely boring to look at. There is no dynamic to your photo, it's flat, uninteresting. Oh, and it does NOT meet the challenge...there's nothing 'Free' about this 'Study'OVERALL:
I am very disappointed in you, I enjoyed most of your work, but this is just plain horrible. I expect better next time.Best of luck in the future. Don't hesitate to PM me if you have any questions about this critique.
Cheers...
...and now the serious part :) I don't have to repeat what everyone has already mentioned about this photo. I hope some day to create a piece of art as great as this.
CONGRATULATIONS "
(I also thought it was pretty sweet)
- 3 years ago
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arcticspirit
