HP VCAM: With No Strings Attached - Draft 2

Great job, it looks very professional.

Very creative. Liked the analogy. Well done.

Great..really smooth in the image motion, voiceover, and music. Nice tone and pace. This video screams HP and their commitment to invention. The goal to link imaginative, artistic people with technology that sets them free toward synergistic endeavors is effectively achieved. Congrats!!

Oh, and one more thing...pick your clothes up off the floor...your Mother could'nt see past the mess.....Love - Dad

looked professional

i liked it. very good. nice catch phrase at the end

Nice. I like the music you chose and the editing is nicely done.

very good job, like what you did with the still images. Very Impressed. Excellent work.

Great Music and Design. Looks like something I would see on tv.

Well done, very professional. i liked it alot.

That is really cool. Hope it goes on T.V.

This is a very appealing ad. The effects were very professional. Overall excellent job!

Nice video! I like the still shots that were used in this viedo and the music made this viedo really stand out. It would be a definate eye catcher to those who would be looking at this product.

Nice work. The colors really pop out and the composition is solid. The transitions are perfectly fluid too. Very smooth. The VO, and the sound in general, is a little weak, but nothing a good mix-down couldn't fix. As for the actual content, I like the way you tie the beginning and end together by talking about the house. The stuff in between is a bit superfluous in that you could stand to devote a little more attention to the product itself. Regarding what flyintheair said, I don't think it matters who these kids are; it matters what the product is to them, so embellishing on it a bit more would be good. Other than that, it is eye-catching and it practically SCREAMS HP commercial, so I think it's right up their alley. Good luck.

Cool effect. I can't say it makes me want to buy a printer, but it is visually stimulating.

I enjoyed it. Very clean-cut, I like that.

The composition is nice but the shots are narrow. It doesn't make me want a printer. The voice over makes this weak. Do we even see who these film makers are? Do we even care who these film makers are?

Oh is this wide screen? This might be why it looks so narrow and why others got dizzy.

very impressive, a professional look and a great job hitting the college age demographic an add like this late summer before school begins would be very effective.

nice editing, really professional

it doesn't make me dizzy. its beautiful.
great job guys

It makes me dizzy. I don't understand the point of this one.

The editing was great. it looks like you put a lot of time into it.

nice pictures, you really get the point across.

awesome ad man...definitely the best one.

excellent job, very impressive, great detail.

very good, i personally enjoyed the transition between the two rooms and the song was great, great job.

visual perfection.

visually stimulating