Creative Writing | August 05, 2009 | 6 comments

The secret song of sun rays

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artemis6
Once , I was the one , waiting windswept water white , Finding the sun , Wandering wildly with delight , Racing shadows in the sand , A whole life at my command , Listening to the ebb , and flow , of wisdom of the heart .. Sigh of love a song , vast deep and strong , Existence always longs to fly , touch the brilliance in the sky , The brilliance of it all ... We did not know impossible , so we went and did it , I could not be discouraged , and so , lived it .
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6 comments // The secret song of sun rays

  • sirpaulmcdarkney
  • artemis6
  • cztheday
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      cztheday  

    • Oh that's just GREAT, Artemis... Here, I am struggling to work in TWO dimensions while you have already conquered the THIRD.

      "Depth" is SO overrated!... ; )

    • 3 years ago
  • artemis6
  • artemis6
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      artemis6  

    • I am glad you enjoyed it . It is a musical poem , so , it would be sung acapella perhaps . There are many wonderful poetic forms , this one came complete and did not , could not , it seemed to me , be better altered to fit them . I just use the rhythm to drive it , slow it down , to give the heart time to open to meaning for the listener . Sometimes I work very hard on a piece , this one was born like a little transparent egg , just so . The sun is a great symbol of creation , but what does it create ? Plop ! There it was . So , I dub this form , Egg shape !

    • 3 years ago
  • DeliaTheArtist
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