My Last Race

VERY POWERFUL!!!! That needs to be on air right now. Thank you for the time, effort, and sharing that story.

Double Green Light (if possible)

Feels fake. Was that guy really in an accident or is he an actor? A "re-enactment" is fine - b4t 4 need t6 be upfront about it.

Ditto great story but feels as though this is an actor and not real..definately needs a "reenactment" title if that is the case

it is not real, that is why it is written and directed by Case, and it has an actor as well. I agree. If it was a real story I would greenlight for sure. Since it is contrived I am not going to.
You should put up the text: "Reenactment" as the piece begins, then I will greenlight. Now it is too deceptive...

Great work. Really a PSA... I like it.

Cut is faster. Like 15 seconds. Let it be like the racing experience and like death. Sudden.

Then it may be a nice clip.
Try it.

To make this work you must find a real guy who survived street racing and is in a wheel chair now. Good first effort though.

That's why you don't race on the street.

There is to many things to hit like trees that don't move. I race professionally with my Go kart on a race track. I do not ride my Go kart on the street because it is too dangerous. When I race my Go kart it is inspected for safety. My person is inspected for safety and the track is inspected for safety.

So if I crash my Go kart in to the safety wall with my head I can live to see another day.

You state in your description that it is fiction. I felt that the actor did not have the intensity of someone who had been in an accident and was left in a wheelchair. Technically, the actor's audio should be boosted or the sound effects (racing, sirens, etc.) need to be brought down. There is too much of a discrepancy in the audio volumes.

Good effort though!

I recently got out of the hospital do to a street racing accident, i fractured my ribs and damaged my back =[ so i fell that these types of videos are good all tho the actors need some work. Good Message tho =]