The Juggler
- added July 27, 2005
- 26 responses
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Would be ready for a greenlight if tightened to under four minutes. Make each point succintly and move on. Very good overall!
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- Ben_Dobyns
- 3 years ago
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Great story, i don't think it needs much changing, get it on the telly!
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Good stuff. I green-lighted it, but it really should be three minutes long and not five. Still, nice work.
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Yea a little could be cut. But it's still awesome and good enough for a greenlight. It's the best Current Gig vid I've seen so far.
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nice work, story is well worth my time
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great story and worthy of a greenlight. however, it really could use some cutting. specifically some of the content after the section about college. i expected that to be the final point and then lead into a conclusion. great footage and story, make more.
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I agree with you guys, cut it down and put it on the tv! I gave it a greeny
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Could use a bit more footage, watching the same shots of them juggling gets old. I do like the story though and perhaps a follow up in 6 months or so to see where these two are then.
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If you just cut the part about the three things that make you different, the piece will be just fine. The Velocity, Speed, Perfection thingy was a little overkill... Great end shot, though. I had to greenlight it!
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Definetely green... but cutting the time down is a must
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- mynameiskristopher
- 3 years ago
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While I agree that it COULD be cut down, I think it's good as is. Sometimes a story needs to breathe and I think this one breathes nicely. Cutting it down would probably make it more frenetic
This is a good Current Gig.
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I agree it needs to be cut under 4 minutes... it drags after about 3:30...and gets very repetitive.
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I disagree with the short attention span theatre enthusists here, length is good and story is well told. Are any Cirque De Soliel producers watching? These guys would be great for your shows. Green all the way.
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It goes about everywhere and then comes back. It's repetitive: Ha, we are gonna learn more about the tricks, no, we won't. Ah, we are gonna learn more about the teacher, no we won't. Ah, we are gonna see somebody actually paying for the entertainment no we won't. WTF ?
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Capitalism is alive and well wverywhere!
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its great, perfect.
Forget about cutting it.
Do it your way , baby - you got it!
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This is great!! Seems good without cuts but I'm an old guy. Nice to keep the original Spanish too, for us bi-linguals.
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- WillettKempton
- 3 years ago
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Good job, fire up the greenlights....
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- delgado_mon
- 3 years ago
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A little long but very good
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- erickaakcire
- 3 years ago
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To cut it would take away the intrinsic beauty and simplicity of the two men and what they do.
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- ChicagoRob
- 3 years ago
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Excellent presentation and videography. Manuel and team tell a great story in a powerful and compelling way. I agree with those who recommend it be kept as is...to cut it, would ruin its rhythm and essence. Love to see more of their work in the future!
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Dynamic. Great shots. It is a short I would have loved to have made.
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Excellent! Great Content! I Luv Bogota!
Cheers!
Mike-
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- claptonfla
- 2 years ago
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So interesting to see that humans can see opportunities to make money anywhere and everywhere!!
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That was really inspirational the 3rd one i watched and it was good the others were dry.