"Le Plan"

way too long. Make it 5 or 6 and I think it will play better. The band at the end just goes on too long. I like it though. Good piece. I really hope to see more international stuff.

But you did get my green light!

More international stuff please! Independent artist have it hard support this piece let their story be told! "GL"

Interesting. Why did you use an RER map at the beginning? This isn't about musicians in the Paris subway. Also, the sound quality is poor - I can hear a lot of fuzz in the background. Please buy a better microphone.

Hi everyone and thank you for your support!
I apologize for not answering any sooner, I had a lot of work :)

Springer : Thank you very much for you constructive critic and for yout support too!
About the lenght I agree completely, and I am working on a new version, shorter, better paced. However I have a lot of work right now as first Assistant Director on a long and twho short movies.

So I will try to update this video as soon as possible, wich unfortunately is nowhere close to soon...

Andrewpmk thanks for your comment. I'll answer your questions :

So you seem to know about the RER, then you might know that it is used to communicate between Paris and the sub urbs.

Now you may have noticed that the title of the video is also "Le Plan" wich is the name of the concert hall we talk aout in this piece. (located in Ris Orangis, Paris sub urbs)

In paris not a lot of people are willing to go out of the city into the suburbs, espescially after the riots.

With the RER map, I wanted to show the way from the center of Paris, to "Ris Orangis" where the concert hall is located. Because this piece is also about going out of your neighbourhood, to support artists and quality.

Now about the microphone : I agree that the sound quality isn't very good and I apologize for it (should I ?), but I did this piece for free, with very little hardware and in very little time too.

I would also add that I am not at your service and I didn't get one buck with this piece.
Now if I get paid for it, and the people who pay me think that I should get a new microphone, I will definitley do it.

So if you like my work, and would like to see more of it, with a better sound, you might consider getting one for me cause I won't.

Still I hope that despite the sound quality, you enjoyed the piece and that you will support more international pieces on current tv !

To everyone : Thanks for your support and for your critics !

Jeremy Jochimek

cool!
please check out my pod on current
<a href="http://www.current.tv/watch/84478832">link</a>