Accompaniment to life
- added September 8, 2006
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- danemroberts
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- danemroberts
- 09/08/06
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I think it could be a bit shorter , but I liked it.
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First off let me say I think its better than all the other miami ad school VCAMs on here. I like the concept, but its only in the description do I understand whats taking place. The music is pretty cool, and i really appreciate the amount of time it must have taken to place each shot on each beat, to make the ad flow. The copy at the end kills it for me however (also written as your title). "Accompaniment to life" Is a wordy syntatical nightmare. And using "life" in any tag should be illigal. Its so easy to use it for any product, that its just not worth using.
I'm going to greenlight it because of the overall idea, but as for the execution, its a little too long, and you already know how i feel about the copy. -
Marley, thanks for your compliments and constructive criticism. I agree with you on every point, especially the tag, and will make appropriate changes. Thanks again.
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- danemroberts
- 09/10/06
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Bet if you trim that pizza sequence, you can get it down to a minute. I like how once the viewer gets to the bar sequence, it begins to become apparent what we're seeing. Close enough for a GL from me.
Side Note: Please check out my latest pod, LLOYD KAUFMAN crosses that line. Enjoy!-
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- DanPersons
- 09/15/06
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