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14 responses // Your time has come.

  • i really really liked it, except that announcers voice was a little strange. but yeah, good job.
    CraigM
  • Very creative! Short and to the point!
    Raisin_Lady
  • I agree with craigM... the voice-over made it seem like a late-night infomercial. On the plus side, the editing is great. And I really liked how you lead the viewer to predict that the actor was going to actually create the w810i with all those materials, but actually physically stuck it all together (if the construction scene yielded the w810i, it would've made it cheesy).
    GL
    tastyyellow
  • That open mouthed pose at the end makes the whole thing worth while.
    ThePrinciple
  • At first when I watched this, I really liked it. But as I sit and think about the effects that this video will have on the world as we know it; and as I ask myself, "how can a silly video teach the children of the world to love and respect each other?" I have come to the inevitable conclusion that I still really like this ad.
    bizkid
  • Holy cow, i am still laughing at this one. I agree that having it reveal the phone would not have been as funny. Other than that, it was short, sweet, and had me ejecting milk from my nostrils.
    neofex
  • Kind of expected, until the 80s themed scene comes and he's dances. The voice over is really bad, and the lighting in the intro need to be redone. Its a cool effect to have the light behind the head, but its difficult to see whats going on in the forefront. Its too bad the deadline has passed, because some minor tweaking would have made this video a lot better.
    Marley
  • This is good, well concieved, well shot, except for lighting, right on
    saiyate
  • Haha. Funny! The ending's V.O. is a little bit odd though. Overall, great job! I like the acting, he is funny.
    linda_t
  • Yo playa- that was funny! the goggles vibrating off the head was hilarious- and I don't know what them haters are talkin' bout with that V.O. dude- there aint nuttin wrong with a lil business man voice action- good luck. peace
    TheSam_and_ArtyShow
  • Great idea!
    saraeshepa
  • i dig the spot very much, concept is right on. i would suggest a bit more light when shooting and a better mic for the VO, but those are details. Greenlight.

    link Let me know what you think of my spot, I welcome comments.
    euroskip
  • Good idea!
    stateofgrace
  • I think good lighting is more than a detail. The poor lighting really killed this ad for me. Its a great idea. The visuals are really funny. The guys creation and faces are awesome. Keep up ideas and work like this plus some good lighting and you will be on TV. What do you think of the new Mountain Dew ad "Happy Birthday"?
    RicksFlicks

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