Smooth Around the Edges

I think is not just good enough for TV, it was just amazing and really sexy for Cinemas, Ipods, whatever. If I have to buy the whole collection of Loreal in order to repay the favor in this way, I'm totally down for it.

Too long, but I definitely laughed when it got to the end, nice job, could you shorten it? GL!

what's the deal with re-uploading? can you just keep changing your piece? anyone know the regulations? thanks,

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The good: Nice work. Elegant & beautiful. Music works great with this.

The bad: It could be a lot shorter. Try making a 45, 30 and 15 second version of this. It'll be a good experience to try it, and will really open the possibility of your chances for airplay. I'm not crazy about your font choice, maybe a simpler cursive font would work better on your slates.

Verdict: But I really dig the concept, it's very original. So I'm greenlighting this anyway. Check out my pods when you can. -zen

thanks, all good comments. i still dig the font, but it looks crappy after the compression. i'm trying to figure out what happened since i did optimize for screen. will prob upload a tweakage soon.

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Loved it ! Makes women want to stay smooth and sexy and make sure their men do too ! the music is nice with it, also the text was simple and to the point.
Definitely (too) good enough for TV !!!!

it's would work better as a 30 second spot i think.

Nice concept. I would definitely cut it down to a :30. Greenlight.

It works well. Though i would agree to cut it down a bit. Maybe 45 seconds thought 30 would be nice.

1481 Views. Nuff said. lol

Very sexy! Nice ending - if you have a chance let me know what you think of mine...

Lol, awesome elegant concept. I am digging the indie music that goes along with it. Although there are some shots that i get the impression that they are uncomfortable and that they are iching each other. I dunno maybe im just ichy right now. GL though.
Check out my movies... AGAIN! - daniel

Luring...think the ad is for women feeling sexy and soft...but it hits the male ego to give back. Is this ad for the Launch of the male product line for Loreal, or is it already out there?? anyway, It's tasteful and pointed at the same time. Very well done.

tha's sexy- I was kinda thinking that you were gonna trick everyone at some point and pan up to a dude's face- hahaha. glad you didn't though. greenlight! Peace
P.S. the punching sound effect was actually my fist hitting a nice 5lb. london broil over and over again until the desired result occured. we have pot roast for dinner that night

Different, sensual take to selling the product; provides a rational for the line that I hadn't thought of before, but is gently compelling. I'm having a little problem distinquishing woman from man here (there is a woman and man here, right?), and I sort of would like a clearer impression that they're together. Nothing explicit, of course, but a shot that clearly shows intertwining bodies near the end would help drive the point home (innuendo not intended). I take it others have criticized the font, which I also had problem with, but if it looks better in the uncompressed version, go with it. In any case, this certainly distinguishes itself from the crowd, so GL from me.

no, no men in the spot. i was thinking of making it a funny piece where you reveal that they are men with soft skin, but opted not to do that to guys. i wanted to sell a men's product by showing no men (i'm sure it's not novel). i agree that it could have been clearer who was in the bed. thanks.

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I watch this spot for a couple time and found that it's a really interesting piece, if you can put soft filter effect to make it like a dream. It will be cooler, but I understand that put it on the web might not be able to see that effect, but I love this spot. GREENLIGHT too.

Dude I wake up in the morning and watch this video everday.

Great ad! It totally makes me want to buy L'Oreal for Men!!!

NIcely shot. The music goes very well. Your concept is very refreshing. GL

Love the ad. very nicely done.

I like it very well done. I really enjoyed it. Nice camera angles.

laters

sex sells.

I found it a bit confusing that there were two ladies. But the choice of music was good.

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