A Day in the Park
- added November 30, 2006
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- noahyv
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- VC2 Top Contenders US (8480)
- VC2 on TV (6218)
- VCAM (785)
- Pop Secret VCAM (77)
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Well shot and acted. You just have to keep in mind that this is a commercial spot and not a short film. You can't afford to spend time on a person "pondering" life (or taste) as you would in a short film. Cut it down to 30 seconds, simply take out all the pondering. GL.
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poasibly, if not, the besgt on e for p-secret... but definetly cut it down few seceonds like gorbi said... GREAT JOB! kudos
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It's a great short. I think it will also cut into a 30. Dont pigeons explode when they eat popcorn? Oh wait, thats rice.
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- Thinkconvergent
- 12/01/06
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I disagree with these people. short films are great, as is yours.
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I agree with the others, cut it down to 30ish seconds. At the end I was expecting something new but was disapointed when nothing else happened. GL for it's comedy though, I've never seen this done before!
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Very funny! Good work.
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The pondering's the thing. What got me was the businessman sticking his head into the bag.
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- inlawfilms
- 12/02/06
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Good job. Great idea. I think that some things could be cut down. Some sharper timing might even make it funnier. In any case GL
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- RicksFlicks
- 12/03/06
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this is so funny!!! love it. would be better if ending was a little shorter- you don't need the part after the pop secret graphic. GL!
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Very cute and I like the edits...I agree, perhaps a bit shorter would be cleaner. Great idea!
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So you guys think I should edit it down? You shouldve seen the longer version! Maybe I'll try to start cutting some things and reupload it. Thanks for all the comments by the way. This is my first current tv submission so it's great everyone was so helpful.
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I really like this idea, it's so simple. If you ever want to try, I would edit it down to 30, you have a lot of slow pacing on there. Good work!
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- Rheahanges
- 12/15/06
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Best ad I have seen yet. Well shot and well acted. Tight!
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Nice work but a little long.Nicely shot.
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Tight job as usual. I agree that the segment at the end where the businessman grabs the bag could be cut out for purposes of shortening the ad.
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awsome job ppl... green light given watch this one also thy are gud link
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- creative123
- 12/23/06
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This is really good
should be way higer in rank
hope it gets picked
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I agree this should have a much higher rank, its a really good idea and it looks good, nice timing, GL
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- semmiecircle
- 12/23/06
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On a system that seems more like a popularity, bartering-for-points contest, I'm glad this was chosen based on the quality factor. GL given from the start. Congrats!
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Out of curiosity, what kind of digicam did you use? Was it done in HD?
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why yes, it was shot in HDV on a sony hvr-a1. I'm glad to answer any other questions about the commercial.
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I love This pop-secret it has humor
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Excellent ad! Apart from the professional edit, the HD quality helps make this look very pro indeed! Love the humour.
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- nictheartist
- 10 months ago
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