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Erik Martonovich has been living on the edge of a horse since he was a youngster. He has taken horseback riding to higher level.
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3 responses // Big Horse

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    Hi DVDiva. I hope you don't mind my critical comments.... :)

    While the focus of this pod is very interesting, a few things make it un-GL for me.

    The contrast in his street interview is so high we can't make out his face. If someone's wearing a ballcap, reflect some light up from under them so we can see their face.

    I'd like to have seen more footage of the performance, but not from the seats - I want to see pods that TAKE me somewhere; a vantage I'd not normally have.

    The ending came all of a sudden - no "The End" title card?

    I think this is a really interesting topic, and I look forward to your future pods. :)

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    Like JJ, I didn't get the sense of being taken anywhere. In my case, though, it wasn't about the performance footage, but the interview. I'd like more about the emotional connection he has, a bit more of the why -- how he feels about the horses, the audiences, being on the road, etc. (In fact, that whole long chunk of performance footage at the end could be cut down -- it gets rather redundant, and I'd rather hear his story). I don't know if you have interview footage that covers these things, but if you do, consider a recut. This is a promising story, if worked right.

    DanPersons
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    Great pod subject, I love horses. It's too bad you couldn't get any closer b-roll, but I understand the limitaions. And maybe a more defined ending. Good job.

    Simplymad9

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