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A day in Soweto


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A short sprint through some Soweto homes.
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2 responses // A day in Soweto

  • Uh...what happened to the rest. It was hard to here what the guy was saying and it wasn't the best story telling. This would probably benefit from some editing. I like that it's a glimpse into these peoples world so I would love to greenlight it, but not in it's present state.

    Cut the guys intro shorter. I found the woman very interesting so you might want to bring her in sooner. And you may want to add the rest of the video. It was cut short. It might just be happening on my end, so correct me anyone if I'm wrong. And if you have any decent footage of the exterior area, it would definitely help.

    I'm no expert. Just a couple of suggestions. I'll shut up now.
    Neghie
  • I want to thank you for your comments. I have re edited the piece in light of the two (?) comments left here.
    mulagata

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