TV Schedule

The Garden


  3. embed code
  4. baxddha
  5. related topics
A ten imnute visit with Deb Soule, spiritualist, herbalist and teacher, in the herb garden at Avena Botanicals in Rockport , Maine .
www.avenabotanicals.com
baxddha

1 response // The Garden

  • Greg,

    I like the material you gathered. Deb Soule's spirituality is moving and clearly put, and your photography carries much the same tone as her words. But the structure you chose for how you organized this film is diffused and meandering. Even the ending feels inconclusive.

    If this were an essay, what would your thesis be? You might find, if you choose to re-edit your footage, that concision might allow you to convey as much information as you currently have and still allow for the breathing room you and Deb seem to thrive on. The right kind of understated music might help, too.

    Good luck!

    jsburman

Add your response

Login/Registration is required to add a response.