Spare Change

It's not too often we here anything from a homeless person, while we hear a bit about homelessness. So for that reason I give you a green light. You could have dug a little deeper into this person, like what he lives for, or does he have any family. And try to stick in b-roll on those jump shots. Keep up the investigative reporting. GL.

This felt long because of the pacing, and I think some of the cutting causes some choppiness. Excellent topic I think, but I don't quite feel for him...I found myself thinking about how I would feel if my homeless brother or son, (well, if I had one) showed up to my house. It did evoke some feelings for me. Better editing and maybe some bg music could make this one a runner. GL.

a unique perspective and good footage. it's good to raise awareness about these sorts of social issues.
GL.

very cool, the pacing might need to pick up a bit but it defiantly held my interest, should be on TV for sure.

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This is well done. The mix of footage and still photographs is strong as well as the minimal music. It does get a little long but as a whole I say yes.

Jon and Trevor,
Very nice show. I especially enjoyed the timelapse shot. Sorry I didn't support your piece earlier.
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Excellent view of life for a person on the street. Flows well. Excellent short documentary on how a person can live on the street.

well done, I like the photograph and the content