Rumino
- added December 30, 2006
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- Chromogenetic
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Homeless, native american puts OUR shoes on and takes us on a journey, where we can learn about the current issues. In a visual montage we will se how WE exploit our mother nature and how our society members act with inequality, unawaress, imbalance and lack of harmony.
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- Chromogenetic
- 12/30/06
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whoa. Just as I was beginning to think I uderstood this short film, a deeper message unfolded. GREAT WORK to whoever put this peace together! Sick music and video edits.
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This was really good, but I'm not sure if it's a Current TV pod, I could be mistaken, but a pod is a short story, this is more of an avant garde experimental film.
The positive: I love the transitions and the filmmaking style of the piece. The music is great, and haunting and works well with your VOs. It's a film in every sense of the word and I love it as a film.
The negative: while visually stunning, I don't see it as a current pod as defined by Current's pod training guide. Check out the training guide on what makes a good story, to see why I am saying this. Also (and this is just my eyes here), there is one scene when you walk to the left out of the white building, and all other walking scenes you walk to the right, not sure if that was by design or not, but it bothered my eye. Other than that it's visually perfect.
I think this would be a great SXSW or ResFest entry, have you considered submitting it to one of these indie film festivals instead? This piece could easily land you a spot at the judges table.
Was this shot in San Diego? The skyline looks familiar to me.
Good luck to you, you have real talent at work here. Feel free to post replies to what I've said. And please, take my comments for what they are: creative criticism, nothing else.
Check out my pod when you can.
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Great pod.
A GL for you.
It was very interesting.
I like the dream like surreal sequences.
Check out my pods.
Ciro' -
notfor tv yet . needs mor content !
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GL! I LOVE THIS POD, such an incredible tone poem! You are an amazing filmmaker my friend, let's see more from you. Stunning use of closeups, camera angles, editing, track work and DP. Phenomenal. Welcome to the community and PLEASE KEEP PODDING, we need more quality work like this here. When you get a chance, come support my Shadow Boxer link Getreel
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this is radical.
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- compositsketch
- 01/03/07
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I loved the style you used and the overall production. However, I kind of agree with Zens analysis of it maybe not being what Current usually airs. BUT ya never know. I gave it a GL. Good luck!
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Really cool . NIce shots and a sucessful intensity . A cut above your average pod .
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Nice film, well done loved the shoes they looked great, timelapses were sweet as. Powerful social message very visual. GL good luck.
I've got a 11 second promo if you want to take a gander. Click on our cheesy mugs and then click "Eat it up"
Cheers Talbott-
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- Common_People_Productions
- 01/04/07
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good look. good music. greenlight.
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- storrent78
- 01/06/07
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I'm deeply satisfied on how my poem was projected in this short. It was a pleasure working with you Marc, you are a true artist, until next time my friend.
Sincerely,
Taylor McCluskey-
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- tmccluskey
- 7 months ago
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