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The Destruction of Enterprise High School by The Storm
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13 responses // Enterprise Ground Zero

  • The destruction of Enterprise High School was truly a tragic event. Just showing images of the wreckage contains a lot of dramatic power. However, I think this piece could have benefited from less handheld camerawork, more carefully composed images, and less lengthy takes. Also, rather than featuring the photographs of all the victims at the end of the piece, it might have more emotional impact to feature them throughout - intercutting with the footage of the building wreckage.
    PatrickHJohnson
  • I agree that this a very touching piece. Perhaps including a brief narration in the beginning, during, after would help facilitates its ability to become more documentary then memorial. I commend you on the challenge of putting something like this together, it is difficult and appreciated.
    JoeVisco
  • for people that dont know the details, this video does nothing to educate.
    fuliado
  • Well Green Light!
    usumacinta
  • Nice songtrack. You might use more close-ups of the damage.

    Unlike the voice-over demanders who plague other vids, I would rather see some simple captions telling the extent of the damage and injuries near the beginning.

    Good ending, though.
    SamuraiDave
  • Not sure why others didnt like it....moved me.......got my GL.....When you have a minute - please review "The Kitchen Killer" - a POD on indoor air quality/burns associated with Open Flame Cooking and a simple low cost solution. It effects those Least Served.

    The link is :<a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/29106978?s1=newVids&lis...
    oneal5643
  • needs editing
    drunkenpaperboy
  • could do with captioning, very moving tho'.
    digitalliance
  • needs some info..but the images and music are powerful....maybe some editing is needed..good luck
    hippisteve
  • No need for captions or further editing, it's fine the way it is. Captured by the moment and not the icing sugar.
    handheldfilms
  • every emotional. i like it. God bless the families of those who were lost
    Arsenal
  • This is really touching, I really enjoyed it. Green Light.
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    chrispmonkey
  • I agree 100% with Samurai Dave's post #5. I was out of the country until recently and had no idea about this tragedy. A quick Google search told me the details, but some info at the beginning of your pod would help.
    amylou

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