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On the CURRENT political agenda this piece is an invitation to rethink what is not to being think enough.
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37 responses // WAR

  • I think that you could cut this down to 10 or 11 sec and it would be a stronger piece.
  • Yes, like Crank said... make it snappy.

    I love the colors and concept. Also, I was sold instantly when I heard that old Kung-fu sample.

    Word.
  • I like the effects. Important to be sensitive to pacing in a short like this. The movement at the first really sets the tempo after which it just keeps slowing down like a toy unwinding. You could easily end this on the shot just before the side shot of the armoured car.
    I would rework it to show the moving tracks shot just prior to that fire shot which gives you a build right up to the end. Also I'd add a sound effect for the shot and hit to give more impact. Even if the weapon doesn't make a percussive sound a low rumble or drum beat can add the extra oomph. Youi have everything you need here...just too much of it. GL for originality and editing...knowing that you will be tweaking it based on this or previous comments.
    P.S. Did I say I was a military buff ? :)

    dave@avav.ca
  • ummmm .... this is pretty cool. BUT first and foremost the street fighter sounds have to go. i agree with crank, cut it down and make your point stronger. i like the night vision look, especially since its obviously masking the fact that the vehicles are toys. good concept, good look. tighten it up and I'll save my vote to see it tweaked.
  • Buen trabajo! algo de razón tienen los demás.
    Pero tu trabajo merece una GL!

    ,V,,
  • Nice concept, I agree to make it shorter.
    GL.
  • I like it GL! Thank you for you visit to SF it was great!
  • very cool current promo.....thanks for the feedback too.
  • scary...
  • very true.

    GL
    marvio
  • cool promo
    zquijano
  • Good job here!
  • I voted NO because i want you to stop spamming all over the place. If it's good you'll get green lights.
    spayced
  • wow, very impactful. a big green light.
  • GL !!
  • im sorry but i dont think it explains enough or really tells a story. its kind of like an inside joke.
    fuliado
  • Thank you next time I'll try to tell a "story"
  • interesting idea.
    peppini
  • Nope. I fail to see what a war machine has to do with current.
  • good job, I like the green color filter. GL
  • Hi Usuma':
    I had to watch your works since you watched mine. I like your effects. I wonder if you are trying to say war has a lot to do with technology these days?

    Also I'm wondering what "GL" means?
  • Looks like the vehicle Hell Tanner drove in Damnation Alley, I like the visuals and sound design but I’m not sure on the message if there is one. Is it a video art piece?
  • macinta: i did watch this earlier, excellent piece of work? how did u develop this? aftereffects or something? cool promo
  • Cool! Where did you get the original footage for that though?
  • Great footage big ups to you
    ronlee
  • Thank you for sharing that awesome video post... I am also doing my part to build proper leaders among the community in a world that's lacking them... I could learn a few things from you. PLEASE, please, take just a moment to return your input on my own <a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/60193451">CAN ART</a> video. I would personally love your consent for TV.
    DonQ
  • Awesome!
  • awesome promo, its so simple and so complicated at the same time!
    greenlight from me,

    check out my promo "Current World" when you get a chance...
    cwetzel
  • Beautifully done. You are very talented.
  • This is good.
  • The music really delivers the message that might not have been clear if you were just watching the clip. Nice blend/Inventive
    rwvachon
  • Effective!
    Boopala
  • WAR should be banned from the planet!!!!! Green Light
    RamMG
  • The sound can be improved a little but overall this is TV ready. The problem: Current will NEVER program something like this.
  • this rocks. keep up the good work....
    steev
  • Very well put, real creative.
    mechinicalarm

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