A Clown Story
- added August 27, 2007
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- Cmischel
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A Clown Story is a touching and humorous glimpse at the life of a bullfighter. Through the eyes of Jesse and Jackrabbit, two bullfighters working in Fort Worth, Texas, we see the passion and dedication it takes to succeed in the dangerous world of bullfighting.
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Great storytelling! I think the importance of this profession could have been driven home with more emotion by adding some cutaways or interviews from wives or girlfriends. I enjoyed most of the camera work but I think there were too many medium shots from behind and over the shoulder. Trimmed up, it's def. an interesting story for TV.
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- amaris_black
- 11 months ago
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Excellent! Guys who wear makeup and kick ass! Right up my alley.
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This piece is too long in its current state. It also lacks a logical flow. Sound bytes should be shortened and natural soundbreaks should replace the lengthy "music over video portions. I do like the intimate storytelling exhibited. For a piece this long there should be a change that occurs in either your main characters or the story itself. I could see this piece working better at 1/2 the length.
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