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Weren't we all punks once?
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- bujuben
- 9 months ago
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sound editing could use a little work, besides that pretty good
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- goldmember25
- 9 months ago
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With the additional footage, a bit better sound mix, your story is great. Keep working on it but i feel its a greenlight project soon....viel gluck!
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- ManKindPhotography
- 9 months ago
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good idea for a story. You have an interesting bunch of guys there. But they WAY you tell the story is as important as the story itself. I don't feel like I know any one of the characters. I can't feel for them. The narrator should speak with some sort of emotion. The backstory of the kids was too long and boring. Told me who they were but not WHO they were. And then you barely skipped over the main part of the story, which is what they are doing now.
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I agree, a little bit of work and this is a GL.
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- imafreeman
- 9 months ago
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Very funny and entertaining. I really like the footage combined with the smacking on the names. Green Light!!!
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- chrispmonkey
- 9 months ago
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great story here with interesting characters...the very end seemed a little rushed but i liked it. GL
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- amaliaterrazas
- 9 months ago
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ending indeed a little unexpected, i find myself hanging to know more, i think it feels....unfinished.
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- Ralphstead
- 9 months ago
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Great story. Great story telling.......
Dude!!! Where's the ending? Finish this, and you'll go staight to the top.-
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- bsundancer
- 9 months ago
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Cool story. Very lock stock and two smoking barrels style. Definitely not finished though. Of all the people that I wanted to know more about, it was Krucki. You left me hanging. What are German engineers famous for?
No GL this time, but if you get an interview with Kruki, show some cut aways of a mental institution, and the island of Fiji then you have a winner.
It really is good. Just give it the finish that it deserves.
Check out my pod when you have a chance. Would love your feedback.-
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- homebisquit
- 9 months ago
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What's up with the ending?!??
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- JeremiahJacobs
- 9 months ago
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An interesting work in progress. It reminded me of both Jack Kerouac books and Michael Apted's "7 UP" documentaries. I would suggest some interviews with the various characters to get more insight into their lives and personalities.
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- SimonHitchman
- 9 months ago
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interesting story concept - needs finishing. I like the idea - when we're young, we never imagine ourselves growing up, that we'll change. There's this perpuated myth of eternal youth but it just isn't so. eventually we all grow up.
Put some work on it and you'll have a really good pod or series of pods. I'll throw GL at you anyway because I like the premise.-
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- SamuraiDave
- 9 months ago
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I thought it was very fascinating to the journeys they all went through; however, at some points the variety felt a little overwhelming.
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- Melissioned
- 8 months ago
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"Punks once!" same as here!! ;))
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