Fes, Morocco Travel Story

Your work is very good, interesting.

Sorry for the squishyness, its HD 16:9. WIll upload a non distorted file but lower res.

Nice video and camera work, you've a good eye for morocco and captured fez very well. some bites, narration, or even text cards would help tell your story...

Nice video and camera work, you've a good eye for morocco and captured fez very well. some bites, narration, or even text cards would help tell your story...

Morocco is a beautiful city, great footage. Green Light!!!
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Check out my work sometime, I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks
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Like the use of photos with the story. Very nice. As jensenjw said some simple captions would be nice. GL anyway but keep the caption idea in mind. Nice music too BTW.

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<a href="http://www.current.tv/watch/61470061">sumo</a>
<a href="http://www.current.tv/watch/47178271">cultural montage</a>
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ooh I want to go to Morocco!!! Nicely done! I agree some captions or voice overs, or even some sounds from the street of Morocco in the background (so we could hear the language and be more submerged in the culture) would help. Maybe even a map or someone other kinds of references for contrast?

Good luck!

GL

i am feeling a little...... JEALOUS. but its okay... Good piece. I echo everyone else in saying add a few captions here and there. GL!

check out my pod on Bike Recycling in NYC

<a href="http://www.current.tv/watch/35722330?list=newVidsByProducer&filterone=28030583&filtertwo=-1&sid=35722330&fr=1">link</a>

GL Amazing what you can do with a still camera. Mesmerizing!

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Visually amazing. I know how long a project like this could take. I would add some voice over to tell some of the story to tie it all together. But I love the style.

peace

I liked it but would agree with TOPLER...I was just waiting for that next ummf to push the piece to the next level. Nice job over all!

any suggestions for uploading a non-squished 16:9 formant?? It looks okay in the preview for VideoEgg. I wasn't trying to tell a story except show modern civilizations coming in, I do want to expand with more images, I was there for nearly 3 weeks, focusing on photography. Thanks for the support.

If you are tough on other in regards to the story told I would expect at least some kind of story in your clip.

Yes, I think most of us like your technic and imagery.
Give us a story and you'll be on TV soon.

Very Strong Visually

M

Superb, you have some amazing visuals and great audio. Greenlight all the way!