A Day in the Trenches
- added June 21, 2007
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A man goes through the strains and stresses of his day. He ends his day with a smile because of the great L'Oreal mens skin care products.
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Poor guy..at least he can look forward to one little bright spot in his day. Nice Job.
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GL! Even though I aim to compete in this contest, I have to GL yours! Great job!
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Thanks. It was my first attempt at green screening. I see a couple things that need fixing in the key.
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Good story telling. Greenlight!
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It makes sense. Thats the kind of things we all have to deal with every day.
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- Gerbermente
- 06/21/07
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The idea just works...simple but effective
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Excellent use of green screen, you lit it really well. And nice concept of the daily routine we all go through. It looks like a nice commercial package. GL.
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Thanks for posting a constructive comment on my latest pod <A HREF=" http://www.currenttv.com/watch/57173461">BIG BUGS</A> . I am not sure if you also meant to give it a GL, as it does not appear to have registered.
I really liked your piece. Very well produced, and the story has everything to do with the product. Great job! GL from me, and good luck with it.-
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- pantazonia
- 06/21/07
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Very fun! Well done story line and such a cute guy you found to be your actor. Do you have his number?
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Yes!
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Nice commercial, well done! Deserves a big GL...
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Yeah Lathe!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing, funny, and clever!!!
Ready for TV!!!
Any who don't think should re-think their future...
cause they have no clue!!!!
wooooohoooooooo-
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- micahcowher
- 06/23/07
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Finally. An ad that doesn't make me cringe. This looked great and got the message across. GL.
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I liked the way you told the story in pictures rather than words. We can all relate.
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Impressive!
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Entertaining as well as it helps explain the product.
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I LOVE THIS!
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- Crank_Design
- 06/24/07
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Cool! Entertaining and would sell the product.
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- michellegene
- 06/24/07
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Best one I've seen for the product. I like it. It kinda was along the lines I was thinking, so I'm going with plan B if I can get it done before the deadline... Good job bro!
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Nice work man. I hear ya!!!
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I like it ! GL !
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GL FUNNY!
check out our pod if you get a chance.> <a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/36518995">link</... -
Nice one! GL.
Very clean graphics yet still fun.
Was he waring lederhosen?!?!
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Lederhosen ...lol...maybe I missed an opportunity for some more humor. Thanks for the comment.
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The bird poop sound is funny.
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- IronMegabyte
- 06/26/07
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Brilliant!
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Love this!
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- Crank_Design
- 06/28/07
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Nice work !!!!
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- akaestamos
- 06/29/07
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Audio is a little at the end but I like this pod with the wa-wa Charlie Brownish like voices of the boss and wife. Good concept for use of the product.
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- SamuraiDave
- 06/29/07
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Just love it! GL.
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I love It!
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- simsplicity1971
- 06/30/07
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Excelent, clear, creative.
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Good concept and well done...i wasn't sure about the green screen effects at first, but it's grown on me...GL!
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I like the concept and the guy having same expression throughout. GL!
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This is just a little to much with the weird fast talking. And your life doesnt seem so stressed.
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You really captured a feeling the audience can identify with.
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- leethompso
- 07/03/07
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The green screen was a little too much!!!
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- schooljustice
- 07/05/07
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awesome...great job. GL all the way!
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Nice. GL
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- bsundancer
- 07/06/07
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Brilliant! Now does l'oreal sell the stuff in gallons?.
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Great work. I like your concept and you executed it well with a variety of shots. GL from me and thanks for you support of my pod. Feel free to check out my other pod "Generation Debt."
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Hi, Lathe!
"Carlsene" reconmmended that I check out your "Loreal Commercial." I'm glad he did. Greenlight; 25 points more for you. It has inspired me to get into VCam work. I hope I can do as well as you, however... Please, take just a moment to return your input on my own <a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/60193451">CAN ART</a> video. I would personally love your review and consent for TV... Can't wait to get your input and approval. 8' ) -
nice and quirky!
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- tomestokes
- 07/06/07
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nice concept. brave approach. well executed. i especially like the lighting. GL!
ps. and no, i'm not (mad) : D-
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- amaliaterrazas
- 07/06/07
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Nice spot. Creative and fresh...
Thanks for the GL on <a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/70473362">Give 'Em Belle!</a> ...
