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A Day in the Trenches


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A man goes through the strains and stresses of his day. He ends his day with a smile because of the great L'Oreal mens skin care products.
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60 responses // A Day in the Trenches

  • Poor guy..at least he can look forward to one little bright spot in his day. Nice Job.
    filmy
  • GL! Even though I aim to compete in this contest, I have to GL yours! Great job!
  • Thanks. It was my first attempt at green screening. I see a couple things that need fixing in the key.
    lathe
  • Good story telling. Greenlight!
    sfrtpro
  • It makes sense. Thats the kind of things we all have to deal with every day.
  • The idea just works...simple but effective
    carlsene
  • Excellent use of green screen, you lit it really well. And nice concept of the daily routine we all go through. It looks like a nice commercial package. GL.
    sspfilms
  • Thanks for posting a constructive comment on my latest pod <A HREF=" http://www.currenttv.com/watch/57173461">BIG BUGS</A> . I am not sure if you also meant to give it a GL, as it does not appear to have registered.

    I really liked your piece. Very well produced, and the story has everything to do with the product. Great job! GL from me, and good luck with it.
  • Very fun! Well done story line and such a cute guy you found to be your actor. Do you have his number?
    elyssiap
  • Yes!
    markfish
  • Nice commercial, well done! Deserves a big GL...
    Katotoy
  • Yeah Lathe!!!!!!!!!!
    Amazing, funny, and clever!!!
    Ready for TV!!!
    Any who don't think should re-think their future...
    cause they have no clue!!!!
    wooooohoooooooo
  • Finally. An ad that doesn't make me cringe. This looked great and got the message across. GL.
    Neghie
  • I liked the way you told the story in pictures rather than words. We can all relate.
  • Impressive!
    anyacm
  • Entertaining as well as it helps explain the product.
    bailsmb
  • I LOVE THIS!
  • Cool! Entertaining and would sell the product.
  • Best one I've seen for the product. I like it. It kinda was along the lines I was thinking, so I'm going with plan B if I can get it done before the deadline... Good job bro!
    BFP
  • Nice work man. I hear ya!!!
  • I like it ! GL !
    ANT1
  • GL FUNNY!
    check out our pod if you get a chance.> <a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/36518995">link</...
    twodee
  • Nice one! GL.
    Very clean graphics yet still fun.

    Was he waring lederhosen?!?!
    EDIT: Opps...that was his necktie undone......:)
    Goldman
  • Lederhosen ...lol...maybe I missed an opportunity for some more humor. Thanks for the comment.
    lathe
  • The bird poop sound is funny.
  • Brilliant!
    fingg
  • Love this!
  • Nice work !!!!
  • Audio is a little at the end but I like this pod with the wa-wa Charlie Brownish like voices of the boss and wife. Good concept for use of the product.
  • Just love it! GL.
  • I love It!
  • Excelent, clear, creative.
    diegoadp
  • Good concept and well done...i wasn't sure about the green screen effects at first, but it's grown on me...GL!

    Please let me know what you think of my Sony VCAM...thanks!
    blando3
  • I like the concept and the guy having same expression throughout. GL!
    DaveToon
  • This is just a little to much with the weird fast talking. And your life doesnt seem so stressed.
    scemo
  • You really captured a feeling the audience can identify with.

    The expression on the actors face is well done also.
  • The green screen was a little too much!!!
  • awesome...great job. GL all the way!
  • Nice. GL
  • Brilliant! Now does l'oreal sell the stuff in gallons?.
    vobbie
  • Great work. I like your concept and you executed it well with a variety of shots. GL from me and thanks for you support of my pod. Feel free to check out my other pod "Generation Debt."
    Hopemn
  • Hi, Lathe!

    "Carlsene" reconmmended that I check out your "Loreal Commercial." I'm glad he did. Greenlight; 25 points more for you. It has inspired me to get into VCam work. I hope I can do as well as you, however... Please, take just a moment to return your input on my own <a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/60193451">CAN ART</a> video. I would personally love your review and consent for TV... Can't wait to get your input and approval. 8' )
    DonQ
  • nice and quirky!
  • nice concept. brave approach. well executed. i especially like the lighting. GL!

    ps. and no, i'm not (mad) : D
  • Nice spot. Creative and fresh...

    Thanks for the GL on <a href=" http://www.current.tv/watch/70473362">Give 'Em Belle!</a> ...
    jensenjw