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The directors seminar of the trip focused on the many similarities between the Iraq and Viet Nam wars. This vignette displays only one--the death of thousands of innocents.
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3 responses // WAR

  • I won't vote to this green light or not because:

    I do like the piece but at the same time I do not relate to it. Your videos feel like they are made for you. You should ask your self the following question: How can you make them so they are also engaging for your current audience? I like the images but there is just to much me, what I saw or what I feel on them. Let me feel it with sounds and images with out you telling me what to thing or make of them. Ultimatelly are you making this videos for you or for us? I hope this helps to improve them.
    NOTOTHEWALL
  • Strong story, I thought the camera movement could have been improved by slowing it down. Are you using a tripod? Sometimes a monopod can be a good substitute and can help improve your pans without slowing you down and getting in your way.
    Thanks for sharing this story.

    Greenlight.
    covelogibbs
  • Cool new pod! Cheers on the GL, I'm sure you'll get plenty more.
    If you have a chance check out my pod about Transfrancisco link
    DeanHamer

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