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SF Oil Spill


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I filmed voluntaries at Ocean Beach in San Francisco cleaning up the oil spill. Ocean Beach was not closed so beach goers were mixed in with a day of hazardous material clean up.
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  • This was an interesting pod. I think I would have ended it with the "go surfing."

    I would have used the "Hazmat" material earlier and cut out the extended interview with the woman in blue. I don't, like, think when she comes back again, like, that she, like, adds anything to the story. I could be wrong, just my first impression.

    Having the surfer walk out with the hazmat crew would have been a powerful image, but I guess that didn't happen, so what can you do?

    With a some polishing, I think this could be TV worthy, nice job.
    covelogibbs

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