ROUGH CUT - The Gong Show: UF
- added March 1, 2008
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- natalie579
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You have five minutes to do whatever you want. Trouble is, so can the audience. See a current take on the classic 1970s game show.
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- natalie579
- 7 months ago
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I would have thought that there where some interesting things to say in the story if I could understand what was actually going on in the story. Your movements are very jarring and I feel that there are a large number of unnecessary camera movements and zooms. Also your audio is very distracting to me as the viewer being that it in some parts is barely audible and in others is blown out and over modulated. I am not sure if you noticed but your lens shade is causing vignetting around the frame of all your shots, and the interviews while I feel that they are good responses I find myself distracted because I am looking up at the interviewee's face, basically looking up their nose. While on the topic of the interviews, next time try and do something interesting with the shot instead of sticking them in the center of the frame, look at your background and frame up a good shot, something with composition to it. All in all I feel that the topic has potential but you are trying to include too much filler and not enough story, there is no real progression and as a viewer I feel that you just shot all your footage and laid it down in a sequence without really thinking how everything would progress.
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And i thought i was known for saying things suck and hiding it helpful instructional comentary. Since that has allready been done i just have to say i hate the sound of my voice and how in the world did the kid that won just walk off the street????
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acctually i was one of judges and i was just amazed how they were able to find some one with such talent just walking around outside the venue or atleast that is how it was implied in the documentery.
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well..i am really sorry.... some times... its the way some words get interpreted is wat causes all the misunderstanding...but sorry for me being so harsh ...i was bit taken aback by the comment...and it being little bit personal .... i got carried away ..and wrote the comment...and i am deleting it...
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