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Guitar Bob (rough cut)



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This is a great story about a homeless guy in Savannah, G.A. that lives in the woods, is on food stamps, has 2 successful children, and a college degree.
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5 responses // Guitar Bob (rough cut)

  • Hell Yeah! Rock Candy Mountain. Great song for this one. This is cool.
    csuspect
  • Nice pod! Very interesting character, he's got a pretty good outlook on life for someone who's down on his luck. There was one scene where there was a bunch of talking in the background of the audio which was somewhat distracting, but other than that the audio was fine. Maybe it could use a little color correction or brightening, but nothing major. Overall, great story and a really interesting profile of someone who's homeless but has a degree, a wife, and kids. Great job! I'd love to see it on TV.
    ajankowski1
  • Really nice intimate character sketch with a much greater social ramifications. Might be able to shorten it up a little bit, but overall a really good job. I also really like the use of music to bookend the piece.
    CBonsignore
  • I think there's a lot of good material here, but it needs more of a through line. I start to get lost in it at times. I think one problem here is that since alot of it is genuinely interesting the instinct is to put it all in, but it kind of dulls the effect of it all that way. If you could extract the most valuable elements and give it a more logical flow I think the increased impact would make up for letting some of the other pieces go.
    mfarrell1
  • Interesting Character for sure and he has a college degree. Would love to see more interaction with other people and what they think about the homeless or if he effects others in the area. +++
    CrazyDave

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