Ways to Save
- added June 25, 2008
- 16 responses
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- Neghie
- Actress: Amanda Herrera
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There are many ways you can save...but why do them, when there's Wachovia?
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Great job Neghie! Thanks for the revision. I'm going to send this to Wachovia tonight.
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Wow. Thanks. Big smile.
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After seeing so many of your comments on other VCAMs (including the 'not yet available' ones), I'm really disappointed not to be able to see yours yet.
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Can you now see some of the other ones? I was able to see them in the beginning, but they closed that loop hole once they realized we were taking sneak peeks.
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Well, that'll teach you to voice an opinion. Yeah, the first page and a half of results is now viewable (including mine); I might be imagining it, but it seems like more have been getting OKed gradually over the last couple of days. I still can't grok the order that the videos are in.
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That'll teach me to voice my opinion??? At least I left comments and didn't just vote it down for the sake of it. Why does everybody have their panties in a bunch about it? Some of us saw it, and left a comment. That's what they're here for.
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JOKE
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I liked you script, but I think you need to work on your film a little bit. I seems a little slow at times.
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Very nice piece. It gets the point in a nice fashion and script, but as the commenter above said it DOES feel a bit slow. I think that might just be the ending shot that does it for me though.. maybe it shouldn't end on what feels like a "downer." She just doesn't seem to into it at the end. But that's just my 2 cents worth, otherwise I think it's a really good spot!
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It looked fine before I uploaded it. It's even stretched in a funny way. I dont know.
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i really like the approach to the assignment. Good script. i would just make two comments with regards to the pacing of the piece:
1) The 'rule of three' is sometimes cited as a comedy writers guidepost...when making a list or citing example, provide three of them (the mind for some reason likes 3).
When giving examples of things we can do to save money, provide 3 examples with the most extreme serving as the kicker at the end. It might heighten comedic value and move the vcam along more quickly.
2) I think the music, unfortunately, should be more 'techno' or upbeat. As much as I hate techno, it seems appropriate for a fast pace, comedic and smart vcam like this one.
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- BooksBrown
- 2 months ago
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Yeah...well, these suggestions would have been helpful before the deadline, only people arent allowed to see them while changes can be made. I did think about taking one out...but what the heck I said. Thanx n e who.
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Nice job!
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- aworldapartfilms
- 1 month ago
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save urself from the banking system it made just to put everyone in dept..without dept there is no value of money its just got out of control becuz of the greed of bigwigs..
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