Heavy Duty Lynn

Great story and character here. Nicely done.

This is a very sad story in America. What is the next step
with this pod? Someone think of something.

Amazing b-roll. Especially when the boat comes off the flatbed.

well done. good cut when the text read that his first wife had been killed and his youngest duaghters was in prison before asking him the question, Did you get to see your daughters much...his pregant pause and explaining he was a loner captured his resignation to how his life turned out at this point.

you guys should follow up and meet the daughter who's in jail...

Interesting how the teacher has a bias towards these documentaries all the while it lacks many technical qualities

A documentary can lack technical quality and still be compelling. A documentary makes a point or tells a story and if that is accomplished, the production values are not as important. This is not to dismiss the technical aspects of filmmaking but if production quality were the sole goal we would be left with a CG life...visually persuasive and entertaining but with little lasting effect on a persons conscience or psyche

Why the hell has this pod NOT been on television? Really compelling guy.

Very compelling story. I think it could have been a bit tighter, and it could use a quick fix with the subtitles so they are easier to read. But very well done! (Nice stills too)