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The Pickup Line

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This is an animated ad I made for the "Can I help you?" VCAM.
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  • jeffreylaub
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    • Not a bad concept, but nothing much happens the first 15 seconds, and then not much explanation is given of what the website offers (and the last graphic is not up long enough to read).

    • 3 years ago
  • Flexius
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      Flexius  
    • jeffreylaub:

      Thank you for your comment - maybe you are right: some points need correction.
      On answering the problems you mentioned:
      - first 15 min too long:
      I extended the intro section to give enough time to notice the girl's awful hairstyle.
      - not enough explanation of the offer:
      I supposed the "Find customized beauty solutions at L'Oreal." line was sufficient, regarding the tight time frame given (30 sec).
      - last graphic is short:
      Same reason as above, though with reducing the first 15 sec, it is solvable.
      Thanks again, Jeffrey!

    • 3 years ago
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