L'Oreal for mens (30 sec version)
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- comedygreen
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This is a shorter version of the first one I submitted, due to changes I was asked to make. I think this version ended up being funnier anyway, even though it was had to cram it into 30 seconds. Well enough about all that; here is the 30 version of L'Oreal for mens. It's about a guy who needs some help with his hair and turns to L'Oreal's "Can I Help You?" website.
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- Humor, Commercials, Hair, VC2 top contenders, 4 more
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jeffreylaub
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Funny concept with a well-told story, but it moves just a little too fast (particularly when trying to read some of the text graphics). Ditching the final chest-hair joke would have allowed you to slow the pace a bit.
- 3 years ago
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jeffreylaub
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parisinla
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this is funny. You dont need the disclaimer though because you covered yourself in the end. Make sure you're graphics clear the titlesafe.
- 3 years ago
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parisinla
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comedygreen
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In case anyone is wondering why I reposted the same ad, only a shorter version, it's because I received an email asking me to shorten it to 30 seconds and remove a name I used. However, I ended up having to change it quite a bit to make it 30 seconds. I hope this version is better, I think it is.
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- 3 years ago
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comedygreen
