Immortality

See, I didn´t get it, but thats maby because I am a Waschbär. Or because your voice sound somehow different. Are you somehow addicted to Helium???

Well but You were so kind to vote for my biggest crap i ever produced so I vote for yours :-P
No sorry :-) I really think your spot is funny! hope you winnnn
Hope we can talk again sometime. Miss you hun

Very good, only thing that could use fixing is the opening with the sideways view, if you could have put it inside a cage with woodchips etc could have been better. GL though still good idea.

Definite Greenlight! Smart! Love your thoughts on mine when you have a moment.

nice spot, very funny and didn't rely on a techno track and special effects. concept only. GREENLIGHT.
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I like it and the concept is clear to me. GL!!!

yes you are correct, it is hamster cam. But Archimedes is from Turkey, not Saudi Arabia.

I believe its Hamster Cam not Gerbil Cam. A gerbil cam would be on a gerbils stomach and with the angle of this shot I would believe that it was taken around the head area of the Hamster hence the Hamster cam. You can see the height of the glass in relation to the hight of the gerbil and a hamster. Gerbils spend alot of there time on there back legs where a Hamster would be more on all fours. And if your wondering what kind of Hamster that was... Teddy Bear Longhair Hamster from Saudi Arabia. By the look of the white strip on that one I can honestly say its a Capricorn. Nice vcam though.. Im going to greenlight it... Hamster testicles are huge..fyi.. ;)

I didn't get the message that the hampster died, during the long drawn out intro. And the absence of music, intesifies the ambient noises of her walking, and him at the store. Why not use a synth or simple loop in the backround to smooth out the audio? The ending delivers well, if only the beginning had built it up a little better.

Girl looks hot. Guy had me rolling with Laughter. this should make up for all the technical hicups associated with the storyline. who drew those pictures? looks like your work. The story reminds me of the Simpsons, or was it the Huxtables, or Silver Spoon, or Full house, or Punky Brewster or Life Goes On or???? Great VO

i agree w/ the other guy- definitely a nice concept, but it isn't as clear as it could be to the viewer. see what you can work out.

I had to watch it twice to figure out what was going on.
I think if there were some way to establish that the kid's hamster is dead in the beginning, the whole thing would be a lot stronger. I like the concept of not showing the hamster corpse, but as an audience member, I have no idea coming out of the box that the frame is tilted because it's a dead hamster cam. Maybe if we just saw the cage from far away in the beginning, and you hold an extra second on the hamster valentine...
All in all clever concept...GL

By the far the best intro out there. Gerbil cam is the shit too. Green light.