Wanted Pop Secret Thief

I really like this ad, it's ready for the tube. GL. check out my ad and tell me what you think. My ad is titled Don't stop the Party for L'Oreal. link

Good work. GL.

awesome! only one negative would be if I worked for Pop Secret I'd want the vo dialogue a tad different because some people might actually think they are unsafe at home if they buy pop secret. Don't laugh. It's true.

Great GL!

Yeah,

You've definitely got talent, your sense of pacing, and story are phenomenal. This is really good work.

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-thanks and GL,
canofmeatfilm

Again great piece.

Talbott

Excellent commercial, you' re good!! GL

good work, good shots.gl

Like the other VCAM (Sunnyside), this one is brilliant! You are really talented, and shows that through your amazing camera work, editing, and overall production values. I believe you are going to go long ways in this business. Keep it up! GL from me!
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Lots of product shots.Exactly what a commercial needs.

Good job guys! GL from me. It's one of the best ones on here!

yay i voted for u archie :]] this is a cute lil comercial.

That was a great CM! Good luck to you!

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Very well done! I was very impressed! It really is like watching a real commercial! Great job!

I like this story with a thief. I would prefer to show the woman being genuinely upset instead of screaming.
Apart from that - great job! GL

Very nice sound design. Nice.

Its good! It works! I still hear POP Sceret even after. Greenlight

Wow! Really great production value guys!

wow... I thought I was watching a real commercial at first. The quality is great. GL from me. Check out my video: link

Awesome! Now I want Pop Secret...

Very nice! I'm getting a safe so my roommates dont eat my Pop Secret! I do agree with ANT 1 it does need to be cut down a lil but all and all very good job!

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Looks Good. I'm sure you can do better with the editing to bring back the length to 30s. GL.

a little confusing is what i meant to say.

visually great, u made that pop secret box look beautiful. but your editing is a little.
please tell me what u think of mine

Nice job!

well done! check out my v-cam "loving Pop Secret" greenlight for ya.

NOT THE POP SCERET!!! Great job! Greenlight from me!

good stuff!! I'll be on the look out...