Talk Along.
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- KTown
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music: "Slow" by We Are the Empty
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Shawna
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loves it!
- 5 years ago
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Shawna
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naisho
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I agree. As I watch the lips move on the screen, I found myself not reading the words at all while I stared into the phone with anticipation of something to happen. I like jellyfishsmack's idea about changing the dynamics of the phone itself. Also, I would probably tighten up the synchronization of the lips and music. I know that's a real pain in the ass to do, but I do believe people really take notice to the loss of sync and creates an irritating vibe. Anyway, I'll give you a GL anyway because of the concept and the fact that you didn't succumb to Garageband, which probably wouldn't be possible for this ad anyway, unless you opted to sing :)
- 5 years ago
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naisho
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jellyfishsmack
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I really like the concept of this ad.
Catchy tune, simple.
I found myself wanting more though. The static phone lessens my interest about halfway through.
This is just an idea (take it or leave it, of course):
What if the phone started out as a smaller element in the frame and gradually grew larger? Just a thought...
GL--since the song is stuck in my head! - 5 years ago
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jellyfishsmack
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invictus
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I love how it just spells it out for you exactly what the benifit of the benifit is. The audience doesn't even have to think about it for themself. When it tells me "only you are the wiser" I just believe them. No question. Very moving.
- 5 years ago
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invictus