Time Capsule

i thought that the music could have been a little more suited for the ad. Other than that, what a perfect idea!

I really liked your work, and overall idea. The timing on the edit is good, i just think maybe the soundtrack could be a little less present. GL!,
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Very original and fresh idea, perfectly executed. It really establishes a bond with the product. Nicely done, as always. GL from me!
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What a terrific idea!

I really like this one. Good work.

Nicely done I like it. Hopefully it does well. It captured the old and everything seperate then brought together as one through technology. Definately GL!!

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i saw where it was going, but still really liked the concept and the execution. GREENLIGHT. my only comment is that i don't think the music needed to be so prevelant, it could have been really subtle to go with the slower pacing. nice work.

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that was fun! greenlight. whens the sequel coming out? you should be on the Sam & Arty Show

Hey Yesenia!! This is Madeli from California- Peter and Jose's cousin! I just randomly stumbled upon your ad! Love it!

hey yesenia, i like the spot a lot. It is a great idea, and i think scott did a nice job filming it
i agree with the comment about not needing the taking off the jacket but i understand the time constraints. overall a great piece of creative work
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Not bad except that historically you may have a technological blunder. Although the DynaTac was first shown in 1983, and because the first integrated commercial cellular network was not in place until 1990 hence making the phone widely available, 1985 may seem a bit too early, unless you were of course in Japan or Europe or rich. Also CD's were also very avilable since 1981, the casette tape was already in the downslope in 1985. You may also refine the garageband track a bit.

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Good concept, nicely shot. Despite what you say about its intended venue, I think it could still be a bit tighter. You could open with the kid starting to put items into the capsule -- all that action with his removing his jacket and dumping the stuff from his backpack doesn't add anything. But the spot holds together whatever, so I'm GLing it.

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Good job Yesenia. Looks great!

Well done, you demonstrate we don't need big budget to do a great thing.

Thanks for the feed back, but keep in mind that I wrote this spot as a :60 spot made for cinema. My goal was to make it feel like a short film. This spot was not intended for :30 seconds, so if I try to remove anything from it will not be the same commercial. The boy putting the items into this time capusle is an integral part to this piece. Unfortunately, due to bad compression (video egg), the spot looses some of it's face value. I hope people can see past that.

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Yesenia

I like this. You certainly have a knack for advertisements.

I think this would have a much great chance of airing if you could get it down to 30 seconds... I'd even try to get it to 15 seconds.

Maybe you could speed up portions of the video and keep key portions at regular speed. This would keep the viewer aware of what’s happening and still maintain a sense of continuity, but shave time off the over all runtime.

great job my friend . keep up the good work . very proud of you and scott .
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i like the concept.

Muy bien. Felicidades.

It's really nice. I really like it. I'm proud of you!

Yesenia you just keep getting better and better you never seem to amaze me WOW this spot make u want to go get one Great job.Lidier!

Really well done, you may want to shorten it a bit
But I like the concept a lot.
Gl

It felt real warm and fuzzy...greenlight

sorry, yensenia. i deleted my previous comment. i'll just say it's genius and leave it at that.

Great spot. Original concept. It has a cinematic quality to it and it is very universal. The music is also very nice. I like the transition to the future. I hope to see it on the big screen. Good luck!

I like it! Here's to hoping it goes on tv! \00/

I loved the spot and completetly inspired by it. I felt I was the little kid, growing up to the onlder kid and opening up what I had store for me. Great job on your spot!!!