Sorry About Your Luck
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- drewphoto
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- VC2 Top Contenders US, VC2 on TV, VCAM
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creative123
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awsome work ppl ... green light given ... check this ppl out thy are also very good link
- 5 years ago
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creative123
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Utterback
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Very clever. "Sorry about your luck" is a great tag line L'Oreal should really jump on. I wish I would have thought of it. Great Job!
- 5 years ago
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Utterback
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squidmaster
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Not really sure how that this relates to the product at all.
The editing was good, though I wish the story would have tied in more with the product. Good try though mate. - 5 years ago
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squidmaster
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tastyyellow
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I really liked the fast-paced editing and it told a story about mirror-swapping, but at the end, I don't think it came across in any way that fits your description. To me, it seemed as if she was in a dire rush to get rid of all the mirrors in the house and a guest was about to arrive.
It needs something that connects her impressive hair style and the fact that she no longer needs mirrors. Your description says that she throws it all away, so perhaps include a clip of her throwing them away in a trash can. The 'Sorry About Your Luck' tag also seemed to throw the story off.
Also, there's something strange about the animation at the end. It looks like you were attempting a color/chroma key. For a simple animation like that, I suggest using After Effects, or even Flash (which I used heavily on mine).
Good luck! - 5 years ago
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tastyyellow
