I like the editing at the end and I guess the concept of living in dew time is interesting, but this is confusing and choppy, but not in a good action way. All the graphics is just overkill and pointless. I'd take it back to the editing room, keeping the same concept, re-edit it without all the graphics, I think it will then flow better.
Hi, It was super fun to go out and film. The song came from my neighbor's band UFONIK. Rich was the most talented actor I knew with an electric skateboard and his life is based around Mountain Dew so it was really organic it that it was my neighbors, my friends and my neighborhood. I learned a lot from the experience. Any suggestions would be appreciated. You'll see more from me. I'm out right now working on a Journalism pod. Thank you.
Love the cutting, love the energy, love how you break with the standard treatment by sticking the stock animation up front. But, forgive me for being blunt, the title treatment is awful. I think the content they carry is still needed -- I particularly like "Everything in Dew Time;" the conflating of "due time" and "real time" just tickles. But lavish some love on your effects here and this will really play. I'm giving a GL anyway, because too much stuff is good, but this needs a final polish to really make it work.