London Snowed In
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- sholao
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On Feb 8th 2007, the big freeze brought snow to the capital, causing travel chaos. I try to make my way to the office in the city from the suburbs.
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- VC2 Top Contenders US, VC2 on TV
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clairef
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hiyah. nice one. agreed with the other comments bout the rarity of snow in the uk tho....
- 4 years ago
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clairef
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ceolach
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Hi Sholao, Enjoyed the pod but agree with other posters on the need to tighten up the end and hcange music. I like the african music that kicks in at one point. When it doesn't snow often it seems people deal better so some upbeat music works. I'll give you a GL nonetheless. Check out my updated POD which you said you'd GL with some changes. Changes made.
- 4 years ago
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ceolach
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JorgitoSol2Boonanga
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The way it was shot, combined with the story telling ... you really feel as if you were there.
I do agree with Eleni, though, that the viewers should be told a bit more how rare it is for London to be covered in snow... to the point that the city almost shuts down, or fails to function properly.
And while I appreciate the reflective music, it almost makes the mood a bit melancholy.
In any case, it definitely captured my interest and I give it a GL.
MrJS
- 4 years ago
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JorgitoSol2Boonanga
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eleni
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great job sholao. I would make two suggestions, one that you explain how rare it is that London gets snow upfront (i think that thanks to Hollywood people think that a London that white is not so unusual...), and also to change the music up a bit to something hipper, sort of 'trying to get to work' on-the-move kind of music. GL! eleni
- 4 years ago
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eleni
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ReedSlattery
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Good flow to the story, great narration. GL
- 4 years ago
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ReedSlattery
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marianitten
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A bit sad. Good narration and images. GL
- 4 years ago
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marianitten
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sholao
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Thanks for the comments, I'll rework the ending.
- 4 years ago
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sholao
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Southernacho
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I agree with DanPersons about the ending, but I like all the rest.
GL. - 4 years ago
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Southernacho
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DanPersons
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Abrupt ending -- could stand at least to cut away to some kind of exterior shot before fade out. But story is otherwise told very well, so GL.
- 4 years ago
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DanPersons