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Filmed very well. Don't see the connection so much. Would have been great for a GPS ad, or I was expecting you to tie it together with a line or two at the end.

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good

love it! great editing.

GL Nicely executed.

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Love the cinematic and melodramatic concept. Nice cinematography, too.

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Love the cinematic and melodramatic concept. Nice cinematography, too.

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Solid concept with a nice twist. GL!

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This is amazing...where did u find that movie voice guy lol

Interesting concept, not well fleshed out though. You should know that she is being spoken "to" before the end. It is only narration up until then.

i dont get it

Not bad. I like it. GL.

Interesting concept. GL.

Random! hahaha makes me remember the commercial better. Good luck!

Great twist. I would add one shot, though it's probably too late. But the shot would be of her looking at her dash as she tells it to be quite. Would help make the connection that it was her car that was narrating the whole thing.

Well shot and with a good ending! GL.
I would suggest shortening it a little bit...

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Great concept, good camera work, good editing. One improvement would be to shorten it a bit. Other than that good job. link

Good acting, good V.O. funny commercial!

Nice work Archie Cheer 2 This is a really Cute Ad

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very nice commercial.GL!

Hi again and thank you for your GL. My coment about your voice over is regarding CONVENTIONS meaning that those are the voices one hear on TV commercials and that kills the authenticity that your piece has or could have. I am not sure you are African American or not but if you are what about using a voice over from an african american person? or what about a person with an international accent? maybe that makes your commercial video more global. The voice over narration as it is now makes me too aware of tv channels that use and have use this type of vooice to sale something over and over again. The voice is too White American in the other hand. Just a personal comments that I hope you can use to make your piece real good. Thank you agaain and let me know if you have more coments or suggestions for my work also. LOVE AND PAZ

I like the main idea but I would change the voice of the narration It is to conventional. Good luck and GL for getting your idea across.

i like this concept :) GL
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really excellently done. but - i felt let down with the pay off. do more with the pay off and you can take this thing places.

I like how it's the women that make this so funny -- go girl!

just for the fun of it. other than , no comment

very creative. i like that

Very inventive. I enjoyed the mystery of where the ride would end.

High production value, clever, good voice over, good acting. I got a kick out of if. Should be a shoe in. GL and good luck.

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This is really good and funny

I loved this piece! Your camera work is great and so is the editing. I would have liked to hear the male VO a bit louder if possible. Overall, very good and funny.
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Clever ads never cease to impress me, this is no different. Wasn't sure where it was going at first, then it got better half way through, sold me at the end. GL!
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This is awsome!!!! Green light for sure

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haha i luv it. Laura was amazing haha. shes such a G lol.

Nice! Some great shots, and I love the twist with the VO

very good work. i hope you continue directing and do some good fiction also (i think you might already do it). gl from the lampman also who likes old and new cars

that was awesome......... you are so talented...

umm... yeah that was pretty funny!!! You did that all by yourself you are going to be very rich one day lady:)

I voted

That's terrible. That is to say, it's terrible that I am jealous. But my mom thinks my id's are cool, so nah! Oh yeah and, GREENLIGHT!

Awesome work... very cinematic and funny! GL.
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Great concept and really well shot. Also I like the editing, its choppy (not a bad thing) but flows so well.

Holy mother, this... is... hi-larious! I don't why on god's green earth this isn't on telly yet. Very professionally done, wonderful cinematography and great acting.
Thank you so much for your kickarse greenlight. And I shall provide you a list of those naysayers who dare not giveth the light. in the meantime, enjoy my 50th GL for you. Keep in touch!

cuuuute. beautiful and fun. Perfect = GL!

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Very nice camera angles. Good acting too. Love the chola. The man of her dreams was funny as well. I laughed when the narrator said and "167 miles later. . . ."
Nice job.
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Love it! GL.

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Awsome work Archie!!

You and your peeps got skillz! GL

Pretty funny, good job!

original and it looks and sounds fabulous. GL
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Oh my God this is SO good, why isn't it on the air? I used to produce TV commercials, if you aren't already, this is a start of an amazing reel! The VO and te select focus and camera angles, editing, casting, the whole deal, trust me, I know what I'm talking about , or used to anyway. Keep podding! If you get a chance come support my newest pod Shadow Boxer link and again, great job. Yeah, and what camera did you use? I use the Panasonic DVX100A at 24p with Letterbox. GL Getreel

Funny, engaging and clever. Also, the composition is sweet. Great concept. Well shot. Good work.

Great work with funny end. GL.

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Hah, that was actually pretty entertaining, nice work! GL!
How did you do the shot looking through the windshield?

awsome work... keep it up... green light given.... check this one also they are aslo pretty good...link

good stuff

You are very creative. Nicely done, with good production values. I never expected that ending. GL from me!

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Really cute ad...I like the rack focus when she's deciding to turn left or right. GL

Great video job

No, I'M just havin' a litle fun! This one is a gem and should be on TV!

That was really Clever! The picture looked great! I used a Canon XL2 on mine, I was happy with the results. What camera did you use? Hit me back let me know! PEACE OUT!!! GL!!!

LOL! That was great, this made me want to se the whole thing over again.

Funny stuff. Made me do a double take. Beautifully shot. GL.

Very well-shot. Nice little short film. Nice hommage to Stranger Than Fiction! I liked that movie - little did you know. GL.

very very funny. great job.

very very funny. great job.

This one was intensely great......loved it... much luck... but with a video like this.. you dont really need it. haha

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