Grandma party

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It is always good to know about events that give an opportunity for others to show their craft. Nice job documenting it and putting it together. GL from me.

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This seems like a really fun event! Good work.

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I might give an introduction thru voice-over or a title bit/subtitle to give a better idea what the event is about. GL anyway

Exactly what the video was about wasn't clear without reading the written description; probably adding it as a sort of title screen would improve the video immensely.

Other than that, I loved it! The people and things they're selling are interesting, the music and camera shots are amazing. Wonderful!

It is interesting it gives an overview of a local community event GL!

i liked it. You should give a little background before launching off. You mixed up the camera shots which was cool. Great music. I'm really happy the name of the place was Stardust not Starbucks. GL!

This was shot well, got a little lost in what was going on at points, but overall, very well done. GL.

Interesting, you got my attention, two things would make the piece more than a scrapbook of the day though:
1. tell what the event is, with an interview if ya got it, or with narration or a slate (txt on screen) if you don't got an interview. the description you wrote says much more than the piece does right now. and i'd rather know what i am watching after 30secs than hear the anecedote about the melting asphalt.
2. get somebody maybe like Ryan Price (i think is his name) to talk about what's like at the grandma party, how they heard about it, you know, tell the event with someone's story...
rest should fall into place once you tell a slightly deeper aspect of this story...
good luck!

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