Secret Agent

wow its 50/50 exactly at the moment :) i GL it

I'm greenlighting this project but just by a hair. And I have to admit one of reasons, I'm greenlighting yours is because you greenlite mine. Think you have a wonderful idea and the camera shots are nice. However, I would have to agree with some of the comments about your piece...It's unclear. This is what I suggest...If you makes these changes... I could easily Loreal being interested. I agree with the comment that Ulla made about a before and after escape shot. The character should looked dissholved and then after "treatment"; "spa-ed up and tidy." I disagree that the actor could have been better; I think the actor should have been given one specific "blocking choice" by the director in first second of the shot...Something with do with stress and time..."getting out of a hairy situation....feeling the pressure of the pursuit. I also think that the sexuality should be placed more on the male versus female. When the women are on the beach putting the product on him; because they'll swimsuits... It's splits focus. I think the women should have on more and the secret agent should be the only one in his trunks... Or camera angles should show; his sexiness so the viewer knows if they use this product the women would swoon for him or. Or... You might want to scope out a few gyms or a few stunt men. Not that the agent isn't attractive but obiously a 6 or an 8 pack would sell the shot. Why let the camera do the work, when the actor can sell the shot. Great idea... Just push a little harder.

did not get the message.

Love it!! What a great idea

GL Cool.

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Cute idea.

The commercial has great flow and makes me want to purchase the product - enjoyed it!

i like tha idea, but agree with previous posters that the acting was poor. I would have liked the first guy to have either a full-blown beard or long hair and then at the end no beard and shaved head or so. Just to exaggerate a bit more and also to make the narrative a bit more tighter. It would also be great to have a little bit of James Bond like movie music and style in there, and to make it more persiflage or stire like. But a great idea, in my opinion.

Love it

It feels like it's been done...like the mob one. That may be one of the issues...at least for me.

He looks really weird. Like he's wearing a bunch of powder or something, and who wants sharp skin? Ouch!

That was incredibly lame. Slow as well, poorly paced, poorly acted. Looks good but that shouldn't count for much.

hilarious!

Don't know why you don't have more votes kid, but this is a good commercial. Check out my promo in a few weeks. I will drop the link off.

I like the natural sunrise color.

i like the idea
Peace.

great effort!

I THING IT IS DIFFRENT AND LOTS OF FUN. IF I WAS A MAN I WOULD BUY IT.

Not much there. Doesn't make me want to buy the product.

looks good Ryan
-Lauren

funny commercial

Great Commercial! Lucky Guy!! Super Loreal products!!!

great!!!

great commercial can't wait to see it on tv

i really liked it from beginnig to end understood what you were trying to sell good job

It's funny and it sells the product , now that the sopranos is done we still need some gangsta style in our lives =) Loved it!!

Very interesting and effective commercial. I would love to see it on national TV.

by the way..... can you give me the contact info for those actors? They were great!

good concept..effective.

i thought it was great!!