Secret Agent
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jazzmcneil
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wow its 50/50 exactly at the moment :) i GL it
- 4 years ago
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jazzmcneil
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AurorAzurAhnInc
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I'm greenlighting this project but just by a hair. And I have to admit one of reasons, I'm greenlighting yours is because you greenlite mine. Think you have a wonderful idea and the camera shots are nice. However, I would have to agree with some of the comments about your piece...It's unclear. This is what I suggest...If you makes these changes... I could easily Loreal being interested. I agree with the comment that Ulla made about a before and after escape shot. The character should looked dissholved and then after "treatment"; "spa-ed up and tidy." I disagree that the actor could have been better; I think the actor should have been given one specific "blocking choice" by the director in first second of the shot...Something with do with stress and time..."getting out of a hairy situation....feeling the pressure of the pursuit. I also think that the sexuality should be placed more on the male versus female. When the women are on the beach putting the product on him; because they'll swimsuits... It's splits focus. I think the women should have on more and the secret agent should be the only one in his trunks... Or camera angles should show; his sexiness so the viewer knows if they use this product the women would swoon for him or. Or... You might want to scope out a few gyms or a few stunt men. Not that the agent isn't attractive but obiously a 6 or an 8 pack would sell the shot. Why let the camera do the work, when the actor can sell the shot. Great idea... Just push a little harder.
- 4 years ago
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AurorAzurAhnInc
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markkie
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did not get the message.
- 4 years ago
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markkie
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JCATDOG
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Love it!! What a great idea
- 4 years ago
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JCATDOG
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DavidGeorge
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GL Cool.
Check out Sister Beatrice Explores. She hard to uncover.
- 4 years ago
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DavidGeorge
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Williec180
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Cute idea.
- 4 years ago
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Williec180
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kat16
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The commercial has great flow and makes me want to purchase the product - enjoyed it!
- 4 years ago
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kat16
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ulla
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i like tha idea, but agree with previous posters that the acting was poor. I would have liked the first guy to have either a full-blown beard or long hair and then at the end no beard and shaved head or so. Just to exaggerate a bit more and also to make the narrative a bit more tighter. It would also be great to have a little bit of James Bond like movie music and style in there, and to make it more persiflage or stire like. But a great idea, in my opinion.
- 4 years ago
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ulla
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jarjar
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Love it
- 4 years ago
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jarjar
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Neghie
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It feels like it's been done...like the mob one. That may be one of the issues...at least for me.
- 4 years ago
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Neghie
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missmay
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He looks really weird. Like he's wearing a bunch of powder or something, and who wants sharp skin? Ouch!
- 4 years ago
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missmay
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Swivel_Master
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That was incredibly lame. Slow as well, poorly paced, poorly acted. Looks good but that shouldn't count for much.
- 4 years ago
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Swivel_Master
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Aaaaaaaah
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hilarious!
- 4 years ago
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Aaaaaaaah
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TissueCleaner
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Don't know why you don't have more votes kid, but this is a good commercial. Check out my promo in a few weeks. I will drop the link off.
I like the natural sunrise color.
- 4 years ago
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TissueCleaner
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moktail
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i like the idea
Peace. - 4 years ago
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moktail
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olly
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great effort!
- 4 years ago
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olly
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NYYANKEE1819
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I THING IT IS DIFFRENT AND LOTS OF FUN. IF I WAS A MAN I WOULD BUY IT.
- 4 years ago
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NYYANKEE1819
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elroypictures
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Not much there. Doesn't make me want to buy the product.
- 4 years ago
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elroypictures
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ladyofdesign
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looks good Ryan
-Lauren - 4 years ago
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ladyofdesign
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jackie41981
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funny commercial
- 4 years ago
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jackie41981
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m444
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Great Commercial! Lucky Guy!! Super Loreal products!!!
- 4 years ago
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m444
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lotsoac
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great!!!
- 4 years ago
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lotsoac
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tbmc1971
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great commercial can't wait to see it on tv
- 4 years ago
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tbmc1971
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amykins
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i really liked it from beginnig to end understood what you were trying to sell good job
- 4 years ago
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amykins
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pdel26
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It's funny and it sells the product , now that the sopranos is done we still need some gangsta style in our lives =) Loved it!!
- 4 years ago
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pdel26
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TheSicilian
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Very interesting and effective commercial. I would love to see it on national TV.
by the way..... can you give me the contact info for those actors? They were great!
- 4 years ago
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TheSicilian
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raffyafy
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good concept..effective.
- 4 years ago
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raffyafy
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ALNYTIMES
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i thought it was great!!
- 4 years ago
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ALNYTIMES