A Day in the Trenches

funny.

Very cute, perfect thirty second spot. GREENLIGHT!

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GL Cute

Check out Sister Beatrice Explores. She has her own way of handling stress & fatigue.

awesome. i dig it. GL. feel free to check out some of my work as well! cool beans!

Hey, I like the video--funny and all visual story telling.

If you get a chance, look at my Prius ad--Love your Wallet

GL!

great concept - very professional -

Like it a lot. Less words and more action to keep us thinking about the product

perfect

Dude...This was PHENOMENAL!

Hope you get a lot more votes for your mad talented skills.

Hope all is well.

Chat later,
Kim Del Salto

We've all had days like that! - Good work GL

I feel like that is my life sometimes. I can relate.
GL

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We Are Little Brazil

Makes for a refreshing change and it's really quick. I thought it was funny. I may even have to try the stuff.

Please take a look at my Current film and vote if you like it. It's quick. It's sardonic and it's very Current.
Cheers.
Paul Treacy
Photohumorist.com

nice job!
check out my pod
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tidy, but is he secretly have a wank at the end

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This was very original. Nice voice. Kept my interest. Just the right length. Of course you have some reds here and no comments!, The sponsors can see through that and know a good commercial when they see one.
I only count a red if it comes with a valid critique, otherwise I consider it was posted by some jerk trying to kill a good rating to make his own look better.
Seeing you're into humor, check out my Tony.
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P.S. Post more videos...I like your work!

Nice spot. Creative and fresh...

Thanks for the GL on Give 'Em Belle! ...

nice concept. brave approach. well executed. i especially like the lighting. GL!

ps. and no, i'm not (mad) : D

nice and quirky!

Hi, Lathe!

"Carlsene" reconmmended that I check out your "Loreal Commercial." I'm glad he did. Greenlight; 25 points more for you. It has inspired me to get into VCam work. I hope I can do as well as you, however... Please, take just a moment to return your input on my own CAN ART video. I would personally love your review and consent for TV... Can't wait to get your input and approval. 8' )

Great work. I like your concept and you executed it well with a variety of shots. GL from me and thanks for you support of my pod. Feel free to check out my other pod "Generation Debt."

Brilliant! Now does l'oreal sell the stuff in gallons?.

Nice. GL

awesome...great job. GL all the way!

The green screen was a little too much!!!

You really captured a feeling the audience can identify with.

The expression on the actors face is well done also.

This is just a little to much with the weird fast talking. And your life doesnt seem so stressed.

I like the concept and the guy having same expression throughout. GL!

Good concept and well done...i wasn't sure about the green screen effects at first, but it's grown on me...GL!

Please let me know what you think of my Sony VCAM...thanks!

Excelent, clear, creative.

I love It!

Just love it! GL.

Audio is a little at the end but I like this pod with the wa-wa Charlie Brownish like voices of the boss and wife. Good concept for use of the product.

Nice work !!!!

Love this!

Brilliant!

The bird poop sound is funny.

Lederhosen ...lol...maybe I missed an opportunity for some more humor. Thanks for the comment.

Nice one! GL.
Very clean graphics yet still fun.

Was he waring lederhosen?!?!
EDIT: Opps...that was his necktie undone......:)

GL FUNNY!
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I like it ! GL !

Nice work man. I hear ya!!!

Best one I've seen for the product. I like it. It kinda was along the lines I was thinking, so I'm going with plan B if I can get it done before the deadline... Good job bro!

Cool! Entertaining and would sell the product.

I LOVE THIS!

Entertaining as well as it helps explain the product.

Impressive!

I liked the way you told the story in pictures rather than words. We can all relate.

Finally. An ad that doesn't make me cringe. This looked great and got the message across. GL.

Yeah Lathe!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing, funny, and clever!!!
Ready for TV!!!
Any who don't think should re-think their future...
cause they have no clue!!!!
wooooohoooooooo

Nice commercial, well done! Deserves a big GL...

Yes!

Very fun! Well done story line and such a cute guy you found to be your actor. Do you have his number?

Thanks for posting a constructive comment on my latest pod BIG BUGS . I am not sure if you also meant to give it a GL, as it does not appear to have registered.

I really liked your piece. Very well produced, and the story has everything to do with the product. Great job! GL from me, and good luck with it.

Excellent use of green screen, you lit it really well. And nice concept of the daily routine we all go through. It looks like a nice commercial package. GL.

The idea just works...simple but effective

It makes sense. Thats the kind of things we all have to deal with every day.

Good story telling. Greenlight!

Thanks. It was my first attempt at green screening. I see a couple things that need fixing in the key.

GL! Even though I aim to compete in this contest, I have to GL yours! Great job!

Poor guy..at least he can look forward to one little bright spot in his day. Nice Job.