original old to young
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markkie
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A+ for effort. The message is there but it's too long.
- 4 years ago
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markkie
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elroypictures
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Dude the ad is way to long. Sorry but its a no for me
- 4 years ago
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elroypictures
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RapidNinja
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...and who here would sit there and watch a 2 minute commercial? Anyone? No? I thought so.
- 4 years ago
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RapidNinja
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skyhangar15
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I like the music though, and it definitely targets old men. "feel young again" says it all. It could be tightened up though.
- 4 years ago
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skyhangar15
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plesi
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It´s obvious whats going to happend from the very begining and its way too long.
- 4 years ago
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plesi
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blando3
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Way too long. Get to the point sooner. I'll check back later...
- 4 years ago
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blando3
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sunsetking
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Edit, then re-edit everything that isn't essential to moving the story fwd. Tighten it up and get to the same point sooner. Instead of having him go to the store, have the L'oreal Hydra already in the bathroom just waiting to be used. Re-work then re-submit
- 4 years ago
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sunsetking
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oragetropical
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I agree with Neghie. It's a way too long , and I think the concept was already used...
- 4 years ago
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oragetropical
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Neghie
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Dude...you need to get to the point much sooner. The visuals aren't captivating enough to sustain my attention passed 1st 30 seconds. I'll try again later.
- 4 years ago
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Neghie
