Dear Toyota
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- DaveToon
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UPDATE 8/10/07
I just want to thank everyone for all your nice comments! There are some very talented people posting on this site and I am honored that my piece was chosen for TV.
I especially want to thank my daughter Haley for doing such a great job on the voice-over!
I also have a new animated spot I created for the XM assignment but I am waiting for the music clearance so hopefully I will be able to get it posted before the deadline!
Dave
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- VC2 Top Contenders US, VC2 on TV, VCAM, Toyota Prius VCAM
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Rizak
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Very Nice! Absolutely the best Prius VCAM I have seen.
I have an idea, but it seems yours will air. I will try and submit it anyway for fun and laughs =] - 4 years ago
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Rizak
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dbocaz
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I'd love to get your opinion on my videos:
link
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dbocaz
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BrianAndMike
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Congrats on being picked for TV. You definitely deserve it.
- 4 years ago
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BrianAndMike
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syberion
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Definite GL. I would love to see a 30sec version, just not sure what I would cut...
- 4 years ago
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syberion
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ChicagoJoe
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Very interesting animation style.
- 4 years ago
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ChicagoJoe
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dbocaz
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Nicely done. The animations are great.
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dbocaz
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bsundancer
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Nice animation and graphics. Good work. GL
- 4 years ago
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bsundancer
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agee
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Great Video!! Made me think twice about submitting my video.
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agee
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b0gw0n
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nice work, the little kid did great things for your ad
- 4 years ago
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b0gw0n
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burrola
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Nice creativity, very professional, and hits your target audience. Well done! The girls voice is the finishing touch. Did you happen to go to USC????
- 4 years ago
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burrola
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Travis5000
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Clean and simple.
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Travis5000
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kathyhaffey
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Loved it!!! Don't change a thing!!!
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kathyhaffey
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andyco
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Steadily creeping up the ranks... sweeeeet. As one of your original greenlighters I humbly request a viewing. Visit my VCAM? It's not animated, but we did CG some glitter.
I'm suprised Toyota hasn't bought this yet. They're milking it.
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andyco
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damagedfilms
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dude, this one is awesome. GL! this one should win.
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damagedfilms
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elroypictures
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yes yes yes !!!!!! great idea. great luck.
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elroypictures
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mavifilm
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awesome!
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mavifilm
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and757
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lovely
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and757
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cwmedia
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very nice.
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cwmedia
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twwillis
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I really like this ad, it's ready for the tube. GL. check out my ad and tell me what you think. My ad is titled Don't stop the Party for L'Oreal. link
- 4 years ago
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twwillis
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oragetropical
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Very nicely done. I love the graphism and the little girl's voice. Perfect!
GL
Check out my ad for L'Oreal Men, if you have the time...
- 4 years ago
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oragetropical
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manowar
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what ad firm did this? perfect!
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manowar
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paddlequest
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Slick animation, very cool indeed.
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paddlequest
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instigator
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Take it National Toyota, great commercial!
Something everyone should like. - 4 years ago
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instigator
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trakial
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Excellent
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trakial
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Lestat
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Great all the way around. A winner with families.
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Lestat
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benjaminV
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Way to go. I really was impressed.
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benjaminV
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filipe
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GREAT
First one i say yes to... because... this is what a great ad is all about - 4 years ago
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filipe
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dschifflin
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Loved it! Very creative and imaginative.
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dschifflin
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BillD222
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Dave,
I really like it.
I know everyone has an opinion yada yada yada..but the only thing I would do different is that I would make the whole looseleaf go full screen after your closeup on the mom.
The red border is a bit distracting and I feel as though I am viewing the story at more of a distance than really experiencing it first-hand.Otherwise great work, I gave it a green.
-BD
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BillD222
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DBP
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GL! Really nice job. Time to go national! Not much else to say as far as constructive criticism... Don't change a thing.
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DBP
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jda2000
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simple, cute, effective.
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jda2000
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toenexx
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Good stuff. If I was going to nit-pick:
1) The moment when the lady raises down her arm, tt feels awkward.
2) The postcards, bridge, statue of liberty and other misc stuff makes the whole thing busy for those moments especially when they are all detailed in comparsion to the simple drawings of the midground and foreground.
3) Some faded/faint color overlaying the drawings would be nice, and help tie in the real photograph of the car at the end.
That was just nit-picking. Regardless, really well done.
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toenexx
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LjBCo
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Now thats a commercial I'd watch!!!!!
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LjBCo
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Umut
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Great job! GL!
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Umut
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mikeygleason
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Great work! Love the animation. GL from me!
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mikeygleason
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Jiivanii
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I like this ADV so much I am reluctant to submit another
for this brand.
Kool,Jiivanii
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Jiivanii
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MsXia
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so cute and enjoyable
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MsXia
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andyco
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Animation is well done, and the voice is refreshing (not too amateur, not too polished).
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andyco
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hundleyjared
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This is beautiful. The combination of the animation and the hand draw style is seamless.
Some suggestions would be to tighten this down to a :30 second spot. Also, if there is a weakness here, it is the Voice Over. If, there is a weakness.
Great work!!
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hundleyjared
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DonQ
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Dope work, Dave. Best V-cam I've seen... Can I just name you the winner already? Listen, please take a second to critique my personal CANCEPTUAL BOOM project, Dave. I would love your personal approval for TV and a review. Cheers!
Hope to hear from you, dude... You've insired me to work on my animation... BTW, what tools did you use to create it? 8')
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DonQ
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brucinho
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Best I've seen! GL - I was going to make a spot, but I don't even want to try to compete with this. We need to keep in contact. I may need you for some animation work in the future.
- 4 years ago
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brucinho
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jennadorn
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beautiful! love it so much! this should be on TV already!
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jennadorn
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devlomedia
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Love it! This is a Great spot!
Thanks,
John L - 4 years ago
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Kwarner
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Dave, I've visited your website and I have to say your experience truly shines through in this VCAM!
Great story and animation.
You have a fluid quality and a 2D/3D sense of technology that makes me envious as an artist lol, j/k. Great job = GL!
When you have a moment, stop by and check out my first uploaded pod about a young artist from the Subways of NYC: Susan Cagle, Thanks!
- 4 years ago
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Kwarner
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pantazonia
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This was really PRO animation! I think your concept was great, and you manage to nail it perfectly. No doubt you have full control of the tools you use, which shows the great skills you have. GL from me.
I would also appreciate your opinion on my pod when you have a minute. Thanks!
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pantazonia
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psnhaffey
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Cool video Dave, tell Haley she did a great job with the voice over.
Nancy and Rick - 4 years ago
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psnhaffey
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tonybadea
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very nice work!
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tonybadea
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bujuben
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very professional
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bujuben
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scemo
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wow
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scemo
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sarahjz
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ready for tv!
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sarahjz
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Ding
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The idea is simple. It makes the whole package awesome. I like the poping cities on the background :)
dindo
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Ding
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lathe
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Looks like a lot of work! GL
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lathe
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dedep
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cute gl
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dedep
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simsplicity1971
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I love your approach to this add. The graphics are amazing and the little girls voice works perfect! GL from me.
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chrispmonkey
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This is so cool, I love your animations! What program did you use?...also i give it a Green Light!!!
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If you have time could you check out my VC2 ad for L'Oreal, its called "Old to Young" please give me suggestions on making it better and please give it a GL. Thanks. - 4 years ago
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syk
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As a mommy who drives a new (red) Prius, I think you captured the spirit and fun of the car -- and I do laugh at gas stations now! Enjoyed the animation and voice over, too.
- 4 years ago
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syk
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sditto
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It got my attention! Very cute idea.
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sditto
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daveafs
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Great animation, with excellent narration.
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Crank_Design
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cute
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Artcgrrl
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Brilliant. Love the animation and the voicework.
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robcozzens
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That is really cute. Nice animation style.
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robcozzens