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Good work. I do think it could be a little quicker to the point. And maybe lose the post-logo bit. But a great idea. Check out my Drambuie ad if you get a chance.

I really like your style.
Everything looks great and the acting was convincing.

I just think its a little slow and long for a TV spot.
I think you could convey the plot much more economically, which could make it more humorous.

Good work!

Pretty good, kid

for me the content doesn't seem relevant to the product.

Thanks for the comment

Your lighting is really good - amazing actually. When I've got another video/film proj. I will be call'n.

Peace, Scott

Great work, I think the music choice fits well wouldn't change a thing.

That was commedy! It held your attention through to the end.

yes it works.
maybe a bit shorter to give it a little more intensity...

I agree the music isn't right.

you have better looking guy friends use them. Other than that looooved the commercial!!

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Good stuff man - you got a laugh out of me. I think it would be better if you cut it down to thirty seconds though. You sold the idea, and then kept selling it. Nonetheless - GL from me.

Alot of you have asked me to change the music to something more romantic. This music is romantic and sexy. It is how we perceive it. Am I right?

I would change the music to something more romantic and sexy. The contrast between the song and the annoying announcer would let the viewer feel what the girl is feeling.

it made me laugh...

very original and funny!

Funny, commercials do suck!

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well done and very real-life! I might have had the guy mumble "thanks for nothing, jerk!" as he drives off angrily.

wow its funny something like this truely happen to me a dumb commercial ruined my dates mood ...funny but true

Looks Goooooood. You're making it, Ryan!

Yeah I agree, the song just doesn't make any sense, I know you like it but it it just isn't working for me. Mais la Na Na elle est formidable. (the girl is great). change the music and you have nothing but green light, helas? Check out my folk art stop fram ead for XM (heads up) it's a totaly different kind of trip but you might like it. Thanks. -c.om.

heehee...I hated the song on the radio (and not very sexy?oh well) but the concept is solid and very well executed. Bespectacled girl is ADORABLE.

I looooooove the transformation to geek

Great for me!
GL

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Although we are restricted to a 2 dimensional screen plane and we shoot in a 3-D world, it is our job as filmmakers to allow the passage of the 3rd dimension - the Z dimension - to pass through the viewers retina and register as a multi-plane field.

And I'd love to know what aspect of the z-axis it is that you are referring to?

Tight like my limbo teacher's spandex
less frivoulous than a well though out George Bush speech
Horizontal and Vertical achievement on target. The only thing you were missing was the touch of the z-axis

almost as funny as Ms. Teen South Carolina's take on geography education.

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GL! Good night shooting, good actors...my only piece of advice would be to trim it down a bit. It felt a little long.

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Great script - attractive actors - very convincing!

its great commercial..but it is alil to long for the concept.

i like the concept, it's funny. i think you could cut it down to 30 seconds though.

I'd appreciate your opinion on my Current promo too. Thanks.

Great - impressive. I enjoyed the concept. Effective.

Great - impressive. I enjoyed the concept. Effective.