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- blubozo
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- VC2 Top Contenders UK
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- tags:
- Life, VC2 Top Contenders UK, stress relief, commit, 2 more
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- credits:
- matt steel this is our project , you deserve credit bud
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Lina1980
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This is a really interesting subject matter and thanks for uploading to Current.com. At present this is basically a static interview with some GV's which at the moment wouldn't be enough, I don't be believe, to get it onto TV. The previous commenter is right in saying it's too long but you'd also have a legal problem using the music without clearing it in advance so it would have to be re-scored. have you thought about tackling this same subject from a different angle - perhaps take someone suffering from stress trying to bring their stress levels down. You should ask yourself, could I say the same thing in an article? I think in it's present state it could be - show us, don't tell us is a golden rule in documentary as it truly engages the viewer so close but no greenlight from me, I'm afraid, despite the relevant and interesting subject matter.
- 4 years ago
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Lina1980
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covelogibbs
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I think this is a bit long. There may be too much backwards at the end? Also, for your final interview bit, the music is too loud and your subject is hard to hear.
We all experience stress, so I think this pod has universal appeal.
I'm Greenlighting because I think with some tweaking and maybe shortening you've got something here. I enjoyed it anyway and it's a good reminder for me to get out and exercise to help deal with my stress level, thanks.
- 4 years ago
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covelogibbs
