Explore The Past Lives Of James The Bartender - A pitch from CritiqalPete.

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Storyline submitted by CritiqalPete

Storyline submitted on November 17, 2010

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James has lived 500 times or more – but we don’t know that much (yet) about what’s happened to him in the past. Who was he? Anyone famous (or infamous)? Can you use the StoryMaker tool to describe someone that James used to be, and what happened to him way back when? Pick a life, any life, and give us a backstory.
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James get a commission from the Dutch crown to found New Amsterdam
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he begins with a simple plan
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He promises the locals they have nothing to worry about
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at night, James has terrible dreams
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He confers with a local medicine man
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They see a vision of a distant civilization, in a constant state of war
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James tries to convince the local settlers that they should cease trading with the Dutch West Indies Company
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he burns down the main trading post
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He's forced to return to Utrecht
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Imprisoned, he writes a letter to the crown