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Describe a scene inside the all-new 2011 Mazda2. Posted by Jim_Goldblum | DECEMBER 6, 2010

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cwhite
cwhite
1 year ago |
This one goes at the end of the episode....

As the staff of Bar Karma say their farewells to the patient in the hospital gown, Dayna hands the patient a car key. The patient looks up, slack jawed and gasping as if about to ask "What's this?" Dayna interrupts with "Don't ask any questions. It's been here waiting for you for decades." The patient slowly takes the key and walks toward the front door, looking back and forth between the bar staff and the key. They open then door to the noisy New York streets and see the Mazda 2 sitting at the curb and a parking meter about to expire. They get in the car, feel around, inhale as though they are comfortable and feel at home in the car. The key goes in the ignition, the car starts and the patient drives away into an uncongested NYC street.

Hey, it's a fantasy, right? We can dream that NYC streets have their moments of being uncongested.

1 comment // Describe a scene inside the all-new 2011 Mazda2. - a pitch from cwhite

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      atemporaryguestcalled_moses  

    • I like this idea. Maybe it could be integrated with the final scene I proposed? Lucy leaves the Bar as others "fade" from their lucid dreams.. In this way, the scene with the car could be part of a "lucid dream" and have some special "dreamy" CG effects, etc..

    • 1 year ago